Refreshing Thought Poem by Rekha Mandagere

Refreshing Thought

Rating: 4.9


I deeply love this lovely thought
It looks so clear and perfect
Which took me away from all imperfect
Heartless, hurting thirsty souls
who wished to see me below their soles
This thought is so friendly, soothing
Makes me often utter something
To the hearts of suffering lots in millions
who could dream of anything better
But nothing can remain for ever undone
Everything is in its vigorous movement
We should always grow towards it's light
May not be today,
But some day we shall conquer it
Isn't it hope that protects
One to face all dragons and hardships?

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Heather Wilkins 09 August 2013

a good poem with a nice message. yes hope does protect and projects toward the future.

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Elena Sandu 13 August 2013

Yes very true, it is the hope that you beautifully present us here. A great message and a plead to change, loved this poem, it made me step aside and think of the power, kindness and greatness of our mother earth, always below our soles yet keeps feeding us keeps helping us. Could hope also be one of our mother Earth endless pockets? ...

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Elena Sandu 13 August 2013

Yes very true, it is the hope that you beautifully present us here. A great message and a plead to change, loved this poem, it made me step aside and think of the power, kindness and greatness of our mother earth, always below our soles yet keeps feeding us keeps helping us. Could hope also be one of our mother Earth endless pockets? ...

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Ramesh Rai 13 August 2013

May not be today, But some day we shall conquer it a grt msg is conveyed here. a beautiful write here

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Lyn Paul 14 August 2013

A refreshing poem of hope, knowing that hope is often alll we have. Thank you

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Khairul Ahsan 30 October 2013

The thoughts are really refreshing. , 'But nothing can remain for ever undone' and 'But some day we shall conquer it' These two lines starting with 'but' have all but conquered me. Very inspirational indeed!

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Hans Vr 15 September 2013

Fully agree with Soul] this is such a nice and hope giving poem. Excellent poetry, Rekha.

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Unwritten Soul 10 September 2013

I love this, really it is a refreshing thought...many vibrant colors painted to the sky after reading this... :) _Soul

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 03 September 2013

A fine positive poem.I like it

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Somanathan Iyer 28 August 2013

Optimism personified. A powerful write.'nothing can remain forever undone'. True, times keep on changing.Thanks.

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