Remote Control Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Remote Control

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Beauty said to herself,
I am aware of my charms,
I can feel myself,
But I have no arms,
I want to kiss and embrace,
I am perfect at my place,
I want to see my beautiful face,
I want to enjoy my lasting grace,
But I have no eyes to enjoy,
I need a repeater toy,
So the toys were made,
And the joys were made,
Keeping remote control in hands,
Beauty started the musical bands,
The toys started singing and dancing',
Loving each other, also romancing,
Let them sing and dance,
And enjoy the romance,
While stepping in harmony,
With the beats of bands,
The toys shouldn't forget, ,
Remote is there in someone's hands.

Saturday, July 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
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Khalida Bano Ali 26 July 2015

A very very thoughtful poem.......................10

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Valsa George 26 July 2015

When the dolls dance, we have to always think that the string is held by somebody else and all movements of the dolls depend on how he pulls the strings! This is true of human beings too! We move and act by the remote control held by some one above us! Enjoyed this highly philosophical write!

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Khalid Saifullah 25 July 2015

Life is beautiful but death shouldn't be forgotten, a great message..................10

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