Rickety Rhyme Poem by John Lyday

Rickety Rhyme



rickety man, rickety house
quickly ran, saw a mouse

stately woman, in stick hut
prickly fish, coconut

Man meets Woman half the way
Woman asks Man want to play?

sticky situation, sticky plot
Man tells Woman rather not

Woman looks Man not well hung
Woman tells Woman not much fun

Man tells Woman another time
Woman goes off end the rhyme

06/09/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 29 July 2009

mmmmmmmmmm this awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! like hickory dickory dock! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Mouse ran up the clock! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i loved your word play.. great indeed... with loves shan

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LOVEFOOL Aka 16 June 2009

This is very good, excellent rhyme and a good story 10+++

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Duh Huh 10 June 2009

Very witty and funny John. It rhymes too lol. I wonder what inspired this one. Thank you for sharing. :)

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MuSiC HeaD 09 June 2009

hehe this was a fun one.. although quite a sad story really, it sounded so upbeat! good one =)

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