John Lyday

Rookie (Chicago, Ilinois)

Rickety Rhyme - Poem by John Lyday

rickety man, rickety house
quickly ran, saw a mouse

stately woman, in stick hut
prickly fish, coconut

Man meets Woman half the way
Woman asks Man want to play?

sticky situation, sticky plot
Man tells Woman rather not

Woman looks Man not well hung
Woman tells Woman not much fun

Man tells Woman another time
Woman goes off end the rhyme


Comments about Rickety Rhyme by John Lyday

  • Shashendra Amalshan (7/29/2009 2:55:00 AM)

    this awesome! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    like hickory dickory dock! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    Mouse ran up the clock! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    i loved your word play.. great indeed...

    with loves
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  • LOVEFOOL Aka (6/16/2009 1:50:00 PM)

    This is very good, excellent rhyme and a good story 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Duh Huh (6/10/2009 3:18:00 AM)

    Very witty and funny John. It rhymes too lol. I wonder what inspired this one.
    Thank you for sharing. :) (Report) Reply

  • MuSiC HeaD (6/9/2009 8:18:00 PM)

    hehe this was a fun one.. although quite a sad story really, it sounded so upbeat! good one =) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 9, 2009

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