Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 9,879 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Salvation - Poem by Amitava Sur

I love you, I pray you and I adore you
Day and night every moment you remind me of you.
I love to remain for ever and ever, only along with you
Constantly I meditate - thinking only you.

You are my reliever, survivor, the energy behind -
My happiness, the peace of mind lies within you.
I find my salvation in the arms of you.

Eagerly I keep on waiting - keeping the doors open,
When you'll be kind enough and bless me being present.
Restlessly, I'm thriving - only to meet you.
I love you, I pray you and I adore you
I find my salvation in the arms of you.

I await your presence with your pleasing persona and aura
I'll fill my thirst and hunger with your divine flair.
Believe me, I'm so vacant and void without you

Calm me and fill my heart
With priceless love and a smile from you.
I love you, I pray you and I adore you too -
I can find my salvation in those arms of you.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

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Amitava (27.10.2013)

Comments about Salvation by Amitava Sur

  • Gold Star - 23,485 Points Roseann Shawiak (5/16/2014 4:29:00 PM)

    Your love is beyond life. It is divine, beautiful, filled with hope. Your deepest emotions are
    felt beneath your quiet serene words. What a captivating image of love you have given here
    in this poem. I am loving it's essence. Thank you Amitava. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 52 Points Erika Wingo (2/27/2014 2:45:00 AM)

    This is such a lovely piece of work. You describe a depth of love with your words that is profound beyond comprehension. What I found so interesting is that one can interpret this poem in different ways. It could be about an all encompassing and endless love that one person has for another, or the boundless and powerful love that exists between a man and his God/Creator or whatever it is that he may call the life force energy that sustains us all now and eternally. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,023 Points Hazel Durham (1/1/2014 4:32:00 AM)

    The light is shining so bright in this beautiful poem with such depth and power of emotions that surge forward with the beauty of salvation! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,662 Points Patricia Grantham (10/31/2013 8:44:00 AM)

    I find my salvation in the arms of you! This is a really great line.
    Your happiness is complete and you're in the land of bliss in
    the arms of your beloved. Such love and compassion radiates
    in your poem. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,038 Points Valsa George (10/28/2013 12:04:00 AM)

    A beautiful hymn by an ardent believer! Outside that Eternal Power, nothing on Earth can assure us peace and joy, so true! !
    Enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (10/27/2013 10:11:00 PM)

    Talking about aura, yours captivating me here. Like your softness in this poem and truly in intimate self in having salvation, life meditation_Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 27, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 7, 2014


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