Senses Delight. Poem by Fay Slimm

Senses Delight.

Rating: 5.0


Blown roses waft what is described as scent,
But bending near and inhaling, we find
Much more - - an essence of unfixed, heaven-sent
Spirit-core, being itself - - - not minding
Invasion by others. - - The rose accepts
Intrusion into it's space, graciously.

Finger-tips brushing each other's skin begins
Invisible contact too - - - - human soul's
Softest approach is touch, tenderly rings
Bells to awaken ecstasy's boldness.
Warmth, invoking sensual thrill wraps close
Around caring hearts - - to comfort wholly.

Silence is toweringly tall, if observed
And heard as beauty, quiet places drench
Us in an awareness all their own, nervous
We may be of yielding to unfenced
Solitude, but the cosmos when entered
Listens with us. - Senses are universal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vincent James Turner 27 April 2009

great work Fay. sorry have not been in contact for some time, i am in a room, it is not completely bare, i have lost all my senses, i am cold, alone, and clawing the walls searching, scratching for sunlight and inspiration, my writing has stopped, my mind seems to be doing the bare basics, each day the same, each hour is merely a signature of change, hand to hand, minute to minute, there is so much i wish to say, write and express, yet all i can feel the is the tracing of scratched cold walls. hope you are well, i send you my love and respect, god bless, your friend V

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aye fay.. this on eis powerful, yes.. beautiful.

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Sue Sie 27 April 2009

This is a delight to read Fay....so well expressed...10++

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Fiona Davidson 27 April 2009

Beautiful write Fay...Fi 10++

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Kevin Wells 27 April 2009

Just catching up on your latest goodies, they are all so consistently well-written, I tend to run out of something new to say. However, I just had to comment on this one, which I find exceptionally prosaic. I was particularly taken by the line: 'the cosmos when entered listens with us...' This is Fay at her best!

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Muhammad Ali 01 May 2009

Great power to express Fay! amazing lines.....10

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Carl Harris 30 April 2009

As you so often do in your splendid poetry, Fay, your words thrill the reader's senses with your magical ability of poetic expression. This delightful poem is no exception to that, and beautifully fills the reader's mind with your enchanting imagery. Carl.

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Carl Harris 30 April 2009

As you so often do in your splendid poetry, Fay, your words thrill the reader's senses with your magical ability of poetic expression. This delightful poem is no exception to that, and beautifully fills the reader's mind with your enchanting imagery. Carl.

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Carl Harris 30 April 2009

As you so often do in your splendid poetry, Fay, your words thrill the reader's senses with your magical ability of poetic expression. This delightful poem is no exception to that, and beautifully fills the reader's mind with your enchanting imagery. Carl.

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Chitra - 28 April 2009

indeed a delight-ful poem wonder words!

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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