Sense Of Myself. Poem by Fay Slimm
Sense Of Myself.
Mindfully conscious of who imposes
Such tight control, and why, I reveal
The potential real me, sensibly go
Underground for a while and conceal
Any awareness of take-over motive
Designed to batten me down. I just smile
And sensing my own informed aura, know
How to bide time before a beguiling
Question I raise, as to who is wiser,
The fool who allows control, or the clown
Who faces possession and disguises
Mirth at the notion of being brought down.
Discerning the awesome power in me
As an amazing person with choice, life
Becomes meaningful, with reason to see
That sensing freedom brings enlightenment.
You win I feel...excellent write of deep feelings here... And 'good' will shine through.....10++
awesome poem, well expressed feelings and imagery............10+++
And we all need our own freedom don't we Fay...excellent write...Fi 10+++
mmmmmmm very deep - and self assessment sometimes brings the murky into the light. 10
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We do limit ourself some times, so worried what others may think, but you get one time at this ride enjoy it is my advice... Andy 10