Denis Joe (5/4/2008 1:58:00 PM)
The thems of your recent poems are reflective (well... moreso than usual) . I reckon that theme is the stronget aspect of your work and your language usage is very romantic.
Ths is an outstanding piece Ted. The second line is stunning and I can understand what Ally is getting at.
A great poem that flows as well as all your peces, thus making for a thoughtful read. |
Alison Cassidy (5/4/2008 4:19:00 AM)
Yes indeed. The idea of 'fading away' is certainly not an exciting end for us drama queens is it? Your poem reminds me of the final frozen frame in Peter Weir's film 'Gallipoli' when the young hero runs 'like the wind' into a sea of bullets. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ |
Alison Cassidy (5/4/2008 4:12:00 AM)
For some reason this one makes me want to cry. The search for perfection, shared on a beach with one dearly loved... Yes, I'd like to see that. 'For it is in those moments, when the sun and sky close their eyes' is particularly lovely. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ |
Coach Roth (5/4/2008 2:59:00 AM)
The search is what it's all about...Coach |
Feel4 Planz Downz under (5/4/2008 2:47:00 AM)
Dreamy.... I am soo soo lucky in my paradise to have a cockle collection that stretches to my east, to my west, my north and south... and I get paid to count them too.... aroha |
Tara almost Sloblock (5/4/2008 2:18:00 AM)
I wish I had written this insightful piece of poetic perfection. t x |
