Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 69,831 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

She Will Not - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

She started writing poems,
I read her poems,
I know only one thing about her,
She is just seventeen.
And a college student.
Probably she has none,
Who can listen to the voice,
Of her broken heart.
Being deceived in love,
The strains of her feelings,
Burst out like streams,
In pretty nice poems.
Like the violent waves,
Of a hot stream,
I see tear in her eyes,
I feel pain of her heart.
Like the dry petals of a rose,
Faded in sun shine,
Too early,
And premature,
And couldn't survive,
Till the full moon light!
When wisdom of sky,
Is scattered in the night.
The petals about whom,
Shelley wrote are heaped,
For the lovely bed,
Of his beloved who has gone.
And memories of beloved,
On the bed of emotions,
It is love itself,
That slumbers on.

The sweet little girl,
At this stage of age,
Can't realize,
It's at all not love.
Just an attraction,
That will not lost long,
I advised her and wrote,
To forget the play boy.
Concentrate on studies,
And should keep writing,
Her lovely poems,
On her friends and games.

Oh God! Why did you give us a heart!
Oh Nature! Why do you call!
I know it well,
She will not! Not at all!

Topic(s) of this poem: deception


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Having read a few poems by a broken heart.

Comments about She Will Not by Akhtar Jawad

  • Salini Nair (9/1/2014 3:27:00 AM)

    very meaningful, and its an advise that colors of love will change with time......nice (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George Valsa George (9/1/2014 1:40:00 AM)

    Having passed through such stages, Akhtarji, you know the intensity of her feelings and you have applied balm in her wounded heart ! Let us hope that she will soon recover! ........ Akhtarji.... you are sizzling with poetry these days! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (8/31/2014 8:59:00 PM)

    It is painful to get hurt at the age of seventeen.But, it happens.A nice poem and a lovely response to a poet's pain.10 (Report) Reply

  • Khalida Bano Ali (8/31/2014 12:57:00 PM)

    A lovely poem with a great message. In teen age girls think they are whereas it is not love. (Report) Reply

  • Khalida Bano Ali (8/31/2014 12:57:00 PM)

    A lovely poem with a great message. In teen age girls think they are whereas it is not love. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 31, 2014



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