Rigzin Namgyal

Rookie - 137 Points (9 may / India)

Silence And Symbols - Poem by Rigzin Namgyal

i did not understand symbols
you taught me symbols
you gave me symbols
we spoke in silence
we spoke in symbols
now silence and symbols have lost the way
i have forgotten to understand symbols
' you ' spoke symbolically
till the moment
you broke the ' silence '

Comments about Silence And Symbols by Rigzin Namgyal

  • Rookie - 0 Points Shivani Gupta (12/9/2012 12:46:00 PM)

    just beautiful..you've articulated the feeling very well..great (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,160 Points Neela Nath Das (10/12/2012 12:12:00 PM)

    A broken heart seeks symbols from his dear one to find solace that his love is there/has not lost its grace! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,477 Points * Sunprincess * (10/10/2012 7:37:00 AM)

    wow..impressive and imaginative..excellent write.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,361 Points Saadat Tahir (1/8/2012 3:05:00 PM)

    silence itself too...may be just symbolic

    there is hope...

    very nice idea there.
    keep writing
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sajna Kailas (1/4/2012 5:30:00 AM)

    haha nice one. what a thought! loved it Rigzin!
    keep it up! God Bless You! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 489 Points Vipins Puthooran (1/3/2012 5:16:00 AM)

    Signs and symbols we used in the past become signs and symptoms of the present/
    A good poem, dear poet! ! ! !
    Top marks! ! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,612 Points Elena Sandu (12/10/2011 6:31:00 PM)

    Good poem, nice written, hahahaha, there are times when we all wish to go back to the signs and symbols, nice poem, thank you for share. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,045 Points Dave Walker (11/29/2011 12:26:00 PM)

    Great poem really like it. A great write.
    May i invite you to read my poem called,
    Rise Of The Crow. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 29, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 3, 2013

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