I am a cute little pussy cat
I love to lie on my mama's cot
I always chase the ugly rat
That comes to gnaw at my master's hat
I wear a striped coat of fur
When I relax, my tail I stir
You know it is milk, I prefer
You can hear me sing a refrain- ‘purr'?
On my face I have pointed whiskers
But nothing as those of the tuskers
Sharp are my ears, that I catch all whispers
I have claws as piercing as pincers
Everywhere I freely wander
When I am at rest I always ponder
When pulled down from the border
I land on my legs, a real wonder
By nature I am very cool
But don't take me to be a fool
Some see me as a ball of wool
Fish often makes my mouth drool
I am everybody's darling pet
Those who see me give a gentle pat
None can hate me, I shall bet
At night I wander like a bat
I have a pair of gleaming eyes
They are of the shade of blue skies
When I meow, each rat in terror flies
Between cats and mice, there's no compromise
a purring meaow for this beautiful poem valsa ......as always beauty in common things around is the mark of a real poet...
A beautifully crafted poem! A poem that should go into children's book. Reading your poem, anyone would love a cat! Great write. Enjoyed it.
a very common observation is glorified, sure it might enthrall if read to the young ones. while looking at the lines itself, every line progressed with the the same experience of looking at a cute lil kitty... ahhaha. see, tell you the truth, it really is hard for me, to write such sharp observation in very simple, apt words, that too maintaining a due rhyme. thanks for sharing such a welcoming piece this morning. God bless.
So sweetly crafted with simple and loving words and with beautiful rhyme.....Valsa......really a phenomenal piece crafted brilliantly.........10/10
An amusing but relevant poem with such interest on a domestic cat and poet narrates the story of the cat by itself through the poem in a beautiful style and it is very much beautiful to read and amuse and relax.
A beautiful rhyme. Nicely penned. Enjoyed the reading of this poem. 10 out of 10
i love cats, and you Valsa, make it larger for me with this verse.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
If it is really a poem on a cat it is really beautiful. If it is a symbolic poem it's a symbol of Valsas complete control and amazing abilities to write a poem. In any case a poem that will be remembered long.