Akanksha Bhatt

Rookie - 20 Points (27-11-1998 / Dehradun India)

So Many Dreams

Once I was standing near the road
Watching the ones who passed by.
Thinking one day when i'll go Abroad
And i'll talk to the foreinergs like hi and bye!

Once i was sitting in my class
When teacher was giving a boring lecture,
I was peeping and peeping outside the glass.
Watching above a bird was flying
Thinking will i'll reach that height?

Once i was sitting in the park
Watching the bees working so hard.
Will i'll be able to do like that?
Will i'll be so helpful for men?

Once i was sitting in my chair
So confused as what to wear?
Then my Father told me about
So high some people reached but how?
Because they weren't afraid of the other ones
What they think what they murmurs!
Rise and rise till you reach the sky
But step carefully because its very much high!

You have to reach there
Where no one can step,
I'll also help others
I'll do my best.
I'll work very hard by night and day
As no one had reached the top in a day.
As an ant working so hard
Storing the food for winters under grass.
I'll not hear anybody what they say
No matter how many thorns i'll get in my way.

There are so many dreams which i have to complete
I don't mind if anybody compete.
There are so many dreams which i had to complete
Before going to bed for my last sleep.
There are so many dreams which i had to complete.
There are so many dreams which i had to complete.

Submitted: Monday, August 27, 2012
Edited: Monday, August 27, 2012

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  • Rookie - 97 Points Biplab Singha (3/30/2014 2:49:00 AM)

    Very naughty and encoureging. I like the expression of the last two lines. Keep on! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,287 Points Roseann Shawiak (3/17/2014 3:51:00 PM)

    Great poem! Reminded me of way back when I was in school, I too would be bored and looking out the
    window, dreaming of so many things and watching nature play. Keep your sights set on what it is in
    life that you want and it will come to you as you walk towards it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ankur Thakur (9/9/2013 12:43:00 PM)

    Last paragraph was beautiful... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anoop Nair (8/16/2013 5:38:00 AM)

    Great work. Congrats. Dreams with passion can be transmuted to material things so whatever you mentioned above is possible.You do need anyone's advice to write because you are already blessed than most of the so called 'poets' here (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Vijay Sai R (1/13/2013 6:04:00 AM)

    a beautifully crafted poem...well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 36 Points Sandy Player (1/4/2013 8:43:00 AM)

    This poem has such a vivacious character. The belief is inspiring too. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Justin Gonzalez (12/6/2012 3:12:00 PM)

    You have beautifully caught the feeling of optimism in this poem and allowed it to infect the reader with the same feeling. Good job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Indrajeet Mishra (11/5/2012 3:27:00 AM)

    Love it............ Really ambition is just like diluge for barren land and if efforts is rit no one hinder it (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 572 Points Ramesh T A (10/23/2012 2:27:00 AM)

    Your drams are all about flying high! That is why you have become a poet! Poets are like birds and like to fly free in theair! You are already taking of to the sky to create wonder in the world soon! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ashmiya Thalvan (10/20/2012 10:08:00 AM)

    i love tat....! ! ! hope surely tat ur dreamzz com true... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jim Davidson (10/19/2012 7:39:00 AM)

    Very nice poem. You will realize the dreams of your heart. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kezang Dawa (10/17/2012 4:13:00 AM)

    nice poem....keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Aung Si (10/16/2012 11:54:00 PM)

    dreams used to be come true.whatever your dream is, one day, it will be. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (10/16/2012 8:51:00 AM)

    Never give up on your dreams, your poem reminds me of when i was in school and later college, and the many times i looked out the window as you do, it's good to have dreams and ambitions and what brings them to fruition is you and hard work and a belief in yourself.Life is one long learning curve, enjoy it, good writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Greg Uhan (10/16/2012 8:18:00 AM)

    wow, it brought tears to my eyes, so loving, so wonderful. You ask such beautiful questions, this poem has really inspired me, you have such a bright future ahead of yourself, all your dreams will be realized. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (10/16/2012 8:03:00 AM)

    An inspirational and motivational poem indeed. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie So Close (10/14/2012 10:41:00 PM)

    great work from a small heart...really fantastic....hope your dreams come true...

    »so close« (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Onyeme John (10/14/2012 10:16:00 AM)

    Oh great! You really have a good heart to make your dreams come true. It reminds me too, that I have much to achieve. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 178 Points Death Silence (10/13/2012 5:36:00 AM)

    yar u are soo sweet, its a very nice poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,792 Points Hazel Durham (10/12/2012 1:55:00 PM)

    A very insightful poem, so well crafted full of wisdom, i loved it! (Report) Reply

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