Springtime Dreams. Poem by Fay Slimm

Springtime Dreams.

Rating: 5.0


Scooping up dropped wings of unused fantasy
I contest the rest of winter,
.................................................and let spring
Declare war on same dark hourlong days, rank with
Damp seashore mist,
........................while I imagine spring-things.

Kissed with woven threads
........................................of golden sun-shiny
Skies, vision has plants outgrowing their neighbours,
While trees, re-frocked in greeny hues,
.......................................................... benignly
Spread lush re-growth around feeding flocks, braver
Imagery, out-running mind's hold,
.....................................................benefits me.

Re-dressed in skimpy clothes, tanning pallid skin,
I close winter's door
............................to let spring in, freedom seen
Means shortest days gone,
....................................and as scheming begins.
Fancy's bud bursts and rehearses springtime dreams.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 11 December 2009

I really like all the images and words and the choice of words. Very pleasing to read and worth rereading slowly to savor all the meaning.

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Carol Gall 09 December 2009

words i can imagine as you wrote spring sneaking back in 10

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Deborah Cromer 09 December 2009

Excellent! Below freezing? Artic chill? I was warmed up by your new poem! Very welcoming to read what you have written on springtime. Debbie

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I wish i could have given the poem a vote of 1 million. thsi poem is so fitting, especially since tomorrow it woudl be freezing.. I hate winter! but i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee spring and Fay's writing.

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