Shahzia Batool

Freshman - 768 Points (Pakistan)

Stuffed Toy! - Poem by Shahzia Batool

He gruffed at me, and
scoffed at me
my stuffed toy!
it took centuries to make him
with all soft stuff inside
with my own hands
in a room where i make toys
to stay beside me in tough days;
now a minute past, he's lost
it's late hour of dark night
my heart misgives
- - - - - - - - -
if he's hungry...


Comments about Stuffed Toy! by Shahzia Batool

  • Rookie Passionate Reader (8/28/2013 5:45:00 AM)

    A compact metaphorical poem! ! !
    so symbolic suggesting great concern for the one you created once! ! ! loved it :))) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 338 Points Queeny Gona (8/21/2013 12:49:00 AM)

    In the Robitic era, we seek the joy, take out pressure with our own hand made toys! Personifying them to be our real soulmates.

    Great write dear Ma'am. Rated 10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chandana Khan (8/10/2013 7:44:00 AM)

    stuffed toys are one's best friends, for sharing, fighting and company. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,038 Points Diane Hine (8/9/2013 10:21:00 PM)

    An enchanting poem. I love the long pause and final line. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,885 Points Heather Wilkins (8/8/2013 10:22:00 PM)

    it took centuries to make him with all soft stuff inside with my own hands. nice (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,953 Points Sallam Yassin (8/8/2013 4:32:00 AM)

    in sentimental things of heart
    every thing is more than
    what he was
    deep and sweet are affairs of the heart/ well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Poet's Fan (8/8/2013 3:50:00 AM)

    if this is the feeling for a 'toy', am just toying with the thought, , how humane is the poetess for humanbeings, a short poem that speaks a volume of the heart stuffed with sensitivity. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,742 Points Wahab Abdul (8/7/2013 9:57:00 PM)

    a very ignificant poem with all its metaphorical meanings... i love it...10... aw (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,384 Points Ramesh Rai (8/7/2013 5:28:00 PM)

    it does express pains of any one. a poetry is ebriched when it expresses pains or pleasure of any one. toys are made in several kind. its breaking is a matter of grief wht so ever be the reason but love for that toy is never erased. beautiful melancholic write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,743 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/7/2013 7:06:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem..It took centuries to make him...Beautiful write.Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,963 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/7/2013 6:28:00 AM)

    It took centuries to make him
    Great effort and how time expands when carefully making a stuffed toy. And the concern for the lost toy which gets a new life and maybe hungry. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 29, 2013


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