The Clouds And The Child Poem by Thampi KEE

The Clouds And The Child

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Here we find patches of a war
mind of a fallen bricks
wings of a sea
muse of a inborn child

bow our passion for a war
your burning hair are fallen
and smiling teeth of a war
mute of a song


but hot waves of sun
bleeding hair of a mirror
and you open your window


But not open the door baby
you may miss your passion for the war
you wish to fight and you kiss the gun


That river is again black
I wish to see the fight in news
a bleeding sight of a mirror
loving song of a mother


Not you want to sight of a dream
The hell
Blood dripping sight of a war

Not make it a dream baby
you may want to fight for your mother

Sunday, September 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: war
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to my Baby a lover
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Skati 21 September 2014

It's a pretty poem. I loved it.

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Salini Nair 10 November 2014

Not make it a dream baby you may want to fight for your mother................................beautiful write kee...nicely presented.....

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Saheb Mohapatra 24 October 2014

really a poignant poem.........a good presentation of war.....thanks KEE

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 20 October 2014

The clouds and the child, nice story highlighted in penned lines. Keep on writing. Nice job.

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 October 2014

Wow, a fantastic dedication to your cute baby. Very true said, its a bad sight for the baby. The gun knows only to fire, it will not see unborn child nor the expecting mother. It will just kill who ever comes on its way. Such cruel is the war. How may unborn babies might have been killed in the war. its really a pathetic condition ever to be witnessed. Fantastic presentation. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 07 October 2014

Oh, this is fantastic Kee! I saw it only now! But the sight of a war I don't think is a pleasing sight!

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