Valerie Dohren

Silver Star - 3,679 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

The Day Is Done - Poem by Valerie Dohren

(For my dear husband, who passed away
on 4 September 2013) .


All flames shall dim, all books shall close
Petals fall from the dying rose
The actor makes his final bow
The curtain falls, its over now

With no more words and no more sighs
We`ve spoken now our last goodbyes
The time has come, the end of this
From trembling lips, a final kiss

Eclipsed is now the coming dawn
From which another night is born
For shadows move across the earth
Another death, another birth

As darkness clouds the closing day
Your quiet heart in silence lay
After the fading of the sun
Last breath taken - the day is done


(Little yellow flowers
Dancing in the breeze
Little yellow flowers
Huddled round the trees
Little yellow flowers
Seemed to know my pain
Little yellow flowers
In my mem`ry will remain)


Comments about The Day Is Done by Valerie Dohren

  • Freshman - 942 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (11/3/2013 10:09:00 AM)

    He is not gone far as you think
    When silence and solitude calls
    You will find him stand and wink
    In the corridors of your mind standing tall.........

    Very good poem and welcome to my page for your valuable comments (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 822 Points Mary Forrester (10/18/2013 4:19:00 PM)

    A heartfelt write Valerie and a beautiful, beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,650 Points Patricia Grantham (10/7/2013 7:49:00 AM)

    The day is done but love and memories still remains. I felt your
    deeply emotional write but I also feel a ray of bright hope for you.
    It may be dark now but the light will conquer it. You will overcome!
    A heartfelt write. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 597 Points Yasmeen Khan (10/3/2013 12:36:00 PM)

    A special poem for someone special with sad tender thoughts and sweet acceptance of Divine will (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (10/1/2013 5:00:00 AM)

    Treasured memories will always be with you Val. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,607 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/30/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    Please remember all the pleasant times you had together. Your lines in parenthesis refer to yellow flowers. Please read my poem 'Five Yellow Butterflies' as they fly away. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points John Brown (9/27/2013 2:41:00 PM)

    Another beautiful poem Val. I don't know what else to say. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 774 Points Juan Olivarez (9/27/2013 11:02:00 AM)

    A wonderful tribute to your loved one. God bless. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (9/25/2013 3:17:00 AM)

    Dear Valerie, my apologies for coming late to your requiem piece. This apparently most stoic and beautiful tribute is a finely crafted and special poem. My thoughts are with you. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,965 Points Smoky Hoss (9/21/2013 8:36:00 AM)

    Surely one of the finest tributes ever penned; beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (9/20/2013 6:25:00 AM)

    A very special poem Val. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,173 Points Godfrey Morris (9/19/2013 11:38:00 PM)

    my condolences lovely poem.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,839 Points Valsa George (9/19/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Your sorrow has solidified into a beautiful poem Val... more poignant and penetrating than poems we write on an imagined situation! We all know how hard it is for you now... yet Time can heal the wound though the scar may remain! But coming back to your poems is the best way to release the pent up feelings of ache! May you get the strength to tide over this loss! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,802 Points Kavya . (9/19/2013 7:22:00 AM)

    a very emotional poem to read Val.
    We all know words will fall short to console you,
    as losing a dear one is not easy to sail thru,
    but good people are very few,
    who are called by God to reside in his heavenly dew. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,733 Points Dinesh Nair (9/19/2013 4:51:00 AM)

    All your dear thoughts will ever be alive with the thoughts of late Mr Dohren giving you all the wherewithal to cross these waves which have caused a temporary adversity in your life.
    Valerie, we are all here together for the bright days to come.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 218 Points Ann Beard (9/19/2013 2:47:00 AM)

    Deepest sympathies. A beautiful poem written with great pain and tenderness. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 300 Points Dee Corpolongo (9/18/2013 12:17:00 PM)

    Val, I am so sorry to have read this, yet he is out of pain now and I send my deepest condolences... This here is a beautifully written poem of deep sadness, and may you continue to bless us with your gifted words. {{{hugs}}} (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,704 Points Lorraine Colon (9/18/2013 11:42:00 AM)

    A beautiful tribute to a loved one lost. Please accept my deepest sympathy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (9/18/2013 10:55:00 AM)

    you are our angel ma'am and god is always close to angels so there is nothing to wish for you cause you have HIM by your side..

    take care
    love you (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,677 Points Anthony Di''anno (9/18/2013 8:45:00 AM)

    Beautifully written Val.
    You have my heartfelt condolences.
    Take care and be kind to yourself. X (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 19, 2013


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