Rekha Mandagere


The Five Jewels - Poem by Rekha Mandagere

The Five precious jewels on Silvern moon
Greeted me to give great boon
And it is my fortune to watch them soon
When P prominently stood polite
E elegantly looked elite
A astonishingly held to its austerity
C contemplatively engaged in creativity
E earnestly pleaded for excellency
The friend of polite, elite, austere,
More creative and excellent is PEACE
And it ensures everyone, live in solace
Puts an end to every menace
And a great bliss to love beauty in silence
By checking man from wild violence
But let it not break into piece
This must become the edifice
On which we will build our enterprise!


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Comments about The Five Jewels by Rekha Mandagere

  • Freshman - 724 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (12/1/2012 11:40:00 AM)

    The poem full of meaning is endearing.Very well written with excellent rhyme! Thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 16,990 Points * Sunprincess * (10/10/2012 7:42:00 AM)

    Love the first stanza it is brilliant.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,205 Points Hans Vr (5/12/2012 8:27:00 AM)

    NIce inspiring poem.
    Very well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 391 Points Joseph Anderson (5/4/2012 2:11:00 PM)

    And uplifting and eleghantly rendered poem about this whole world's most pressing problem. A bravo
    to you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,735 Points Ramesh Rai (5/2/2012 3:06:00 AM)

    a nice explanation of peace. flow of this poem is also nice.the foundation of peace, lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (5/2/2012 12:48:00 AM)

    I love the way you have started the poetry...The Five precious jewels on Silvern moon
    Greeted me to give great boon (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,125 Points Elena Sandu (4/30/2012 9:06:00 PM)

    Lovely written dearest Rekha! To stop the path of violence is the people dream. My efforts, too small I don't think that counts. But if we do unite no power can stop all the warmth of hearts.Thank you! ! Love and smiles, Elena (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 30, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 8, 2012


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