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Vijay Sai (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)
The journey of endless destination
Waking from my sleep,
I saw a faint flickery ray of disaster,
the disaster, not to say, Oh! not to say,
inviting heaps of sadness, not known,
rain of sorrows,
carrying many many drops of soberness,
and endless tears,
over the mortal body
of immortal fame and success,
The success,
free from this world of envious visions,
free from the spider web of family and foes,
For the end is not another day and dusk-
but permanent.
The wakeless sleep,
which will bring,
soothing peace and perseverance in the disappeared soul,
causing untold grief amongst us.
*The pain and suffering encountered at the expense of the sudden demise of a beloved person is shown. It says that the success and fame of the departed soul is immortal.
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perfect title for this awesome write..enjoyed.. :)
You may leave a couple of blank lines more before your explanation. There is a always a thrill to decipher a poem and check whether our view of understanding is correct. The key should be a little distant apart. Well! the poem is excellent. Vijay, You have also become immortal with your poems.
Vijay I think we all think it becomes too much sometimes but I don't think death is a better option - I used to but I've learned that life is the better option and I think one of the gifts we have as poets is to be able to do what you have done here; write out your feelings be they joy or frustration-Thank God for poets and poetry I know it's saved my life.
The pain and suffering encountered at the expense of the sudden demise of a beloved person is shown. It says that the success and fame of the departed soul is immortal
great, the idea is unique.........
keep up.
Fine tribute on immortality to make oneself free from envies and web of many worries in the world!