Abdul Wahab


The Legendary Untold - Poem by Abdul Wahab

So many words have been spoken
Yet things remain unexpressed
So many words have been spoken
Yet things remain unheard.

Speaking is busy everywhere
Yet the untold entity is there.
He resides in the every corner of the heart
Of every man, like a blind black stone
He is a deaf and dumb walking down the road.
He is writhing in the secluded lane of the vein.
He is the flaming fire of the soul
As an Unextinguished burning coal.

No ventilation no language
Pent up feelings falling like foliage.
Is he a dead volcano or a pressure cooker?
A spark is needed from the bonfire
To burst to burn down every things every where.

He is alive and leads a life of legendary tragic hero
Along with the born despondent and void zero
The breast of untold bangs on his breast
Cruel sand brick stone walk and graze.
The heart has a bun on the oven
Moves hither and thither with unbearable strain
Dying a death of failure and pain.


Comments about The Legendary Untold by Abdul Wahab

  • Rookie - 42 Points Darryl Tadmi (5/23/2012 3:48:00 AM)

    I really appreciate how you turn your phrases to express while saying nothing... It's like we can feel a wind pressure, to guide and open the mind, saying: think about it and say it yourself, with your own words! In the end I wasn't sure anymore of the context but I guess it's wanted... It's very inspiring! Thank you! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Aman Sa (3/4/2012 10:38:00 AM)

    This is a piece which says itself of the genius that it comes from..I always wish that i write poems such as these yet to me I end uo much lower.. thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Maria C. Pires Costa (2/26/2012 7:11:00 AM)

    I love the rhythm, pace, metric and imagery of this poem as the poet describes the hard circumstances on The Legendary Untold...
    My favourite lines are these: ... He is the flaming fire of the soul/ As an unextinguished burning coal and the three last lines: The heart has a burn on the oven/ MOves hither and thither with unbearable strain/ Dying a death of failure and pain.
    Keep up writing and sharing with us...
    Maria (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Life Goes On (2/24/2012 10:59:00 AM)

    Wow
    it surely is one of your best works (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Okoye Charles Chukwudi (2/24/2012 3:15:00 AM)

    Nice poem....beautifully scuptured.....enuf hv been said bt the truth remains unspoken...keep it up.

    Please read my poem...A picture...thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,329 Points Pheko Motaung (2/19/2012 8:34:00 PM)

    A stunning poem by the best of them all! I love your beautiful poems.Congratulations and best wishes to you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Nurain Ali-balogun (2/15/2012 3:53:00 PM)

    As I sit here om my own, I think of my mind-overcrowded with loads, of those little things that I left untold. Nice piece man. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (2/12/2012 9:08:00 AM)

    Yes, this is the picture now. Wait until he finds real self confidence. The whole picture will change. When he finds that everything is up to his belief and thoughts. If he dwells on problems, he gets, if he dwells on beauty, harmony, eventually his whole world will be changed to that. Wake up man! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nilufer Dursun (2/12/2012 7:49:00 AM)

    The ones whose hearts aren't sensitive they never be satisfied morally.Nine point for this poem.
    Nilufer DURSUN (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points John Dowdall (2/11/2012 5:33:00 PM)

    Excellent. Well said, fine introspective poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Sankaran Ayya (2/11/2012 11:33:00 AM)

    YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT SUPPRESSED FEELINGS, SLEEPING VOLCANO
    THAT MAY ERUPT ANY TIME. TONE AND TEMPO OF THE POEM HAS
    DIFFERENT BEAT AND RHYTHM AND COMPEL THE READER TILL THE END
    PLAIN TRUTH OF SUPPRESSION AND ITS WOES.ARE YOU TALKING
    ABOUT ANY PHILOSOPHY WAHAB?
    -KAVIN CHARALAN (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ashwini Ahir (2/11/2012 7:19:00 AM)

    wow. its just amazin.. best poem untold (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Xdxd Grey (2/11/2012 2:50:00 AM)

    nice poem.. but i dun know what is the thing that you have not told (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,110 Points Kee Thampi (2/10/2012 10:57:00 PM)

    A road to heart and sweet words yet untold
    Speaking is busy everywhere
    Yet the untold entity is there.
    He resides in the every corner of the heart
    Of every man, like a blind black stone
    He is a deaf and dumb walking down the road. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 205 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (2/10/2012 10:28:00 PM)

    Powerful words, strong message, amazing poem Wahub....keep them coming. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (2/10/2012 9:54:00 AM)

    your poem is a story of life.... Original, unique and unrepeatable, I know many people who would say that it is written about them...you are a philosopher and mystic poet for me because your poems exert inexplicable influence on human. thanks :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sultan Amed (2/10/2012 8:46:00 AM)

    Its a great good poem Mr. Wahab. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Sanu Puthupallil (2/10/2012 12:40:00 AM)

    a great poem...having a good theme....... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,591 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (2/9/2012 10:51:00 PM)

    the first paragraph itself is superg and can address the rest of the passage. marks 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raj Arumugam (2/9/2012 10:00:00 PM)

    highly philosophical lines, Abdul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 7, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 20, 2012


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