How I wish I would have the special words
To write the very most fantastic verse
I would pen it down with feathers of birds
write the nicest poem in the universe
I would dip the colourful plume in ink
That is magic and wonderfully blue
Using gothic letters of which I think
Anyone could see they were made for you
And this world would be full with jealous eyes
They would all be envying you so much
All people ‘d turn their heads towards the skies
Wish a poem was written for them as such
But this one was for you and you alone
A superb poem, with a wonderful tone
A non-comparable expression of heartfelt love, real romantic way. Excellent write.
Oops! The last verses do not rhyme. But this one was for you and you alone The most beautiful poem, with a wonderful tone. (suggestion) . Keep on writing.
Many thanks, Herbert. You are right about the last verses. Good suggestion to use tone.
I love the sonnet form and this one is true in style, form and substance.We all would like to write the line immortal..Very well done
Beautiful, i see that you tried many form of poetry and thats a very nice idea to make you be one of the real poet..love this one very much
Superb desire expressed in an excellent poem. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
indeed a blessed gift to give poems, perfect poems... NIcE! ! ! !