Rigzin Namgyal

Rookie - 137 Points (9 may / India)

The Mountain And Me - Poem by Rigzin Namgyal

..so here i am amidst the mountains..
..just the mountains and me..
..for its grandeur like a potent wine..
..flows through every rock, every pebble..
..and through every grain of sand..
..the mountains gaze at me like a king..
..as if to narrate me an ancient epic..
..the epic of the faded kings of this virgin land..
..that stands buried between ancient days and now..
..the clouds drift lazily between earth and heaven..
..searching for perch at the top of the mountains..
..the eagle pierces the sky in the distance..
..breaking the circle of the earth and the skies..
..preying its eyes on a lamb among the flock..
..the shepherd keeps its flock veiled..
..by the threat of its loaded string..
.the river is now happy with summer..
.for it roars and growls..kissing the foothill..
..meandering away from the chaos of this world..
..lashing on ferociously on the weak wooden bridge.
..the powerful winds keep howling..
.the towering trees gyrating..
..as if welcoming the winds..
..the leaves keep rustling and whistling..
..conveying me..the secret message of the mountains..
..the birds are chirping..
..welcoming..this onslaught of summer..
..its so quiet here..
..with no one to speak to..
.just the mountains and me...
..for between us we have forgotten the world..
..and i no longer feel like a human..
..but a hermit living alone in this abode..
.dazzled by nature's ethereal scheme..
.and the fury of its beauty that slaughters.. :) ;)


Poet's Notes about The Poem

..i wrote this poem during my stay in Ladakh this summers..it is a quiet town cradled in the lap of the Himalayas..here nature is at its ethereal best..it also happens to be my hometown..

..Valerie Dohren..dropped 'd' and added 'the'...dropped 'dat' and added 'that'..

Comments about The Mountain And Me by Rigzin Namgyal

  • Bronze Star - 2,127 Points Kee Thampi (11/17/2012 4:02:00 AM)

    a poem written on mother nature, when we fill words of emotion, it reaches to our hearts
    the mountains gaze at me like a king..
    ..as if to narrate me an ancient epic..
    ..the epic of the faded kings of this virgin land..
    ..that stands buried between ancient days and now..
    ..the clouds drift lazily between earth and heaven..
    ..searching for perch at the top of d mountains..
    ..the eagle pierces the sky in the distance.. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (10/10/2012 7:14:00 AM)

    You made me feel the beauty of Ladakh.Thanks for sharing your experience thru this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,990 Points Babatunde Aremu (10/10/2012 5:32:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem. You have succeeded in taking the reader to the Himalays. Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,011 Points Valerie Dohren (9/22/2012 12:51:00 PM)

    A really beautiful poem, great imagery and wonderfully descriptive. - would prefer you to have dropped the 'd and used 'the' instead, and 'that' rather than 'dat' etc, otherwise an excellent write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 303 Points Guy Lip-more (9/22/2012 8:22:00 AM)

    Powerful and beautiful writing, I felt as though I was there, very good writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Neetha Sasidharan (9/19/2012 7:37:00 AM)

    so powerful.....you hv got that inborn talent to narrate wat's in ur heart through smooth words.....not allowing the reader to get distracted, , , , so grt hats off..........10 pts, , , , kp penning... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,714 Points Ramesh Rai (9/17/2012 7:36:00 AM)

    beautiful poem. i do appreciate. keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,910 Points Dave Walker (9/17/2012 6:14:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, really like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (9/17/2012 12:41:00 AM)

    ah, the eternal call of the mountains! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,732 Points Hazel Durham (9/16/2012 10:32:00 AM)

    Catching the sheer majestic grandeur of the mountains and the beauty of nature in all its abundance overflowing with the magnificence of God's creation. I really enjoyed it, excellent! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Shivani Gupta (9/16/2012 10:18:00 AM)

    love the flow of the poem..nature is beautifully captured in words..loved reading it..keep it up! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points Romeo Della Valle (9/15/2012 6:05:00 PM)

    Deep and well crafted! A nice flow and thought provoking write that definitely shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up my dear brother! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo- New York City

    http: //www.romeodellavalle.com (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Jacques S Mateya (9/15/2012 7:47:00 AM)

    -d epic of d faded kings of this virgin land.- like the personification here! good work and rich poem! bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (9/15/2012 7:06:00 AM)

    I can just utter--beautiful. Nature is caught here with her beauty and grandeur. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eindaray Kyaw (9/15/2012 3:27:00 AM)

    So great...an excellent poem..I enjoy this! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 249 Points Vipins Puthooran (9/14/2012 3:10:00 PM)

    'tis really a beautiful poem! ! ! ! ! ! excellent! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,242 Points Saadat Tahir (9/13/2012 8:31:00 AM)

    i really loved the flow of the poem...the strong link with nature...the use of common charming visages...is endearing
    could we not convince you to dropp the extra dots

    cheers
    :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 10, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 26, 2014


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