Rigzin Namgyal

Rookie - 10 Points (9 may / India)

Were You Jealous


..O wicked creature of gossamer wing...
..sashaying by that night i heard you sing....
..you tiny monster how cunningly did you fly..
..that night i saw the murderous, bloodthirsty look in your eye..
..when the sun was in love with another part of the world...
..that's when Bam Stoker's 'dracula' in you grew bold..
..that night i had an angel by my side..
..' were you jealous '..i ask? ? ... why in a group you all allied...
..you bit her many times wen the lights were out..
..marring our world..turning into 'hell' our night out..
..as u clawed your needle into her you heartless 'bitch'..
..you left behind memories in the form of endless itch..
..you could have bit me 'bitch'! ! ! ..suck me till you did quench your thirst..
..stopped that gory adventure for she was my guest..
..your body swole with her innocent blood, you no more looked lanky..
..i wished i were a 'witch'..could have turned you into a donkey..
..my focusing palm, how i wish your 'life' i could get..
..but her besides me, you were lucky, i was tied in the cobweb of her net..
..O mosquito! ! ! ..there's a hell lot to complain..
..that night i thought of poisoning your brain...
..i promise..i will get back to you in the twilight sky..
..every drop of blood of yours, i will suck till it runs dry...
..that night will be the night when upon 'you' i will predate...
...with your blood my 'wounded' soul i ll sedate...

Submitted: Thursday, October 18, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, September 03, 2013

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