The Rose And The Shadow Poem by Rani Turton

The Rose And The Shadow

Rating: 5.0


The rose spoke to the shadow:
'But why do you follow me? '
The shadow replied, 'Never have I seen
A beauty to rival with thee.'
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The rose blushed in confusion
And didn't know what to say
The shadow, courteously said:
'Let me stay near you if I may'.
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'It is only by your substance
That I may take form
Your very existence enables me
To exist and perform.'
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The rose and the shadow thus
Became the closest of friends
From sunrise to sunset
The shadow the rose defends.
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Copyright: Rani Turton

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 14 May 2009

Everything casts shadows in the right light.

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Mamta Agarwal 14 May 2009

this is an amazing poem in content and composition. 10 goes to my fav list Mamta

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Sandra Fowler 19 May 2009

This one has more than a touch of soul. Beautiful, Rani. Warm regards, Sandra

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 20 May 2009

This poem reminds of one Jean de la Fontaine's poems, however, the ending, the after-taste, the conclusion did not taste like a 'creme brulee'. Since you live in France, please read: Le lievre et la tortue. GL

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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 May 2009

'The rose and the shadow thus Became the closest of friends From sunrise to sunset The shadow the rose defends.' My 10 with pleasure for this excellent poem.

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Vaibhav Pandey 27 May 2009

this is a such a beautiful poem ma'm....lovely rhythm and rhyme...goes to my fav...10+

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R.k Das 26 May 2009

a very very delicate and sensitive emotion expressed with tremendous beauty and words chosen are just right, ,

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Shekhar Joshi 25 May 2009

beauty of rose is rivaled, even defeated.. yeah it is..really... a wonderful poem to me

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Deep, meaningful and creative writing Rani. The last stanza is beautiful with the harmony of nature completing the picture of the glorious rose and its shadow. 10 Karin Anderson

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Bob Blackwell 23 May 2009

Wonderful poetry, but without our sun both would die. Thank you Rani. Regards Bob

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