Captain Cur

Rookie - 340 Points (England)

The Treasure Is You - Poem by Captain Cur

All treasure chests
I have found
have been empty,
until I opened you.


Comments about The Treasure Is You by Captain Cur

  • Silver Star - 4,099 Points Patricia Grantham (6/5/2013 10:07:00 PM)

    Lovely sentiments in such few words.
    A treasure that is beyond measure. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,895 Points Heather Wilkins (5/25/2013 5:49:00 PM)

    very brief and to the point. I feel your message. very nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Passionate Reader (5/25/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! simply beautiful :) loved it! ! ! your few words said it all! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 930 Points Shahzia Batool (5/23/2013 11:57:00 AM)

    One can feel the richness of this second person! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,798 Points Valsa George (5/22/2013 1:23:00 AM)

    Fantastic! ! Quite awesome! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (5/18/2013 11:54:00 AM)

    Brilliant Captain...talk a lil and it still beautiful..loved it_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,776 Points Wahab Abdul (5/18/2013 11:48:00 AM)

    wow! a very significant poem with wider c annotations and the poem is with a marvellous craft in few a words, love it.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 11, 2013


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