Thirteen One Days Of Thoughts (Part I) Poem by Unwritten Soul

Thirteen One Days Of Thoughts (Part I)

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My daily thoughts for 31 days (16 days on this page)in January 2019, try to keep my mind positive.

Day 1. Knowing our weakness is, knowing how to improve ourselves to be better.

Day 2. When people misunderstand about me, I rather leave it than to think it. I just don't want to do injustice to them like they do to me.

Day 3. I adore the moon's generosity, for light not by its own, but to bright for all in the darkness is selfless.

Day 4. Build a bridge between your heart and your mind (May it makes our decision well-balanced and humane)

Day 5. The best place to travel is our content mind. The ticket that rarely we appreciate…and to get

Day 6. Wish to be like flowing water, as wherever it goes, the green sprouts and follow to grow

Day 7. No matter how high the clouds climb the sky, the blessing rain still falling on the ground

Day 8. The greenest part in our life is the sweetest memories that we keep in our mind

Day 9. If summer is somewhere in my hands, I wish I could warm those wintery, cold-hearted people so they could bloom their smiles, like spring is here again

Day 10. The best remedy to heal is by an honest acceptance, it will avoid us from permanent scar named regret

Day 11. It's not that you don't have talent it just you don't have a deep passion

Day 12. Often I borrow the voice of thunder, never the strike of lightning, mostly with blessing like rain for you… (my care is sometimes disguised as anger but never it really is)

Day 13. To write a beautiful history is by doing great today and greater tomorrow. As what is present now is going to be old…(here we are now history in the making)

Day 14. Don't laugh at someone's fall. Help if you could, or pray if you cant, for that make your existence more significant.

Day 15. Cursing won't change someone's attitude, praying for them however the best way to invest your words. (If advice is not working, use your words for something better)

Day 16. The sky is never losing the sun, never change its colour in the day time, it just the clouds hiding it sometimes…(things will be fine)

Sunday, January 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: reflection,thoughts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just when January 2019 kick off, i was thinking that i should write down some thoughts that i have in mind, something that i used to keep..something that cross to my head time to time... so i decided to fill each day of January with some positiveness for myself..and i shared with some friends, but then i bring it here so i will remember it too someday... the things that i used to keep. well documented...i know i didnt write a poem here, that can compensate my thought in poetry to be in different version, a raw idea that i usually have before writing a poem. So here i just share 15 or 16 thoughts and will post 15 lines next month. If you have something to ask about it you can ask in the comment section or message me so we can discuss about it...my thoughts maybe not parallel to you but i just share whats mine and yours are welcome my friends.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 27 January 2019

To me 10th day was outstanding.... The best remedy to heal is by an honest acceptance, it will avoid us from permanent scar named regret

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Unwritten Soul 27 January 2019

Thank you dear, It was written from myself to advice my friend...i dont want the flaws will make us regret later or some feeling will keep us haunted...once we accept things, easy for us to move ahead. Thanks dear :) i appreciate it

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Muhammad Ali 29 April 2019

Hmmm. Hi dear. Flower like lines. Color plus fragrance. How if these are titles and poems are on their way.

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Unwritten Soul 30 April 2019

Hi, after yearssss lol.. What do u mean titles and poems are on their way? you mean i writing poems from these lines. Hmmm...I let them expand in readers mind only. Plus if i would like to write poems again, let see if it worth sharing, if not i just write in my mind and let it disappear on my memory longevity...lol

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Rebecca Navarre 25 February 2019

Ever so beautiful! .. With such inspiration and light! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .............................+++++

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Hans Vr 21 February 2019

A treasure of wisdom. I am so glad, I dropped by at your page. Wonderful initiative to write down your thoughts on a daily basis. I have tried that in the past but it never lasted long. Still I have a few note books filled over the years. Keep these thoughts close to your heart. I am so sure they will make you happy whenever you read them again. Excellent!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 February 2019

Don't laugh at someone's fall. Help if you could, or pray if you cant, for that make your existence more significant. JUST SUPERB EXCELLENT WERE U BORN ON A 13TH 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ I ALSO COMPOSED MY 13 COMMANDS SOME DAY I SHALL SHARE O FIEND SOULFUL

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Unwritten Soul 30 April 2019

How do u know i was born on 13th... Thank you for your kind comment :) have a great day ahead

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Mj Lemon 27 January 2019

Soul, such a great, amazing list. I think Day 4 may prove the hardest for so many people. This gem goes to myfavourites.

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Unwritten Soul 27 January 2019

Thank you dear Mark, I appreciate it that we need some think to look at when we review every aspect of life... Yes, Day 4 is difficult, it was written because i saw people do judgement so easily by their strict mind, or too emotional...i think we are human we have more advanced thinking but of course a precious heart to support understanding. Maybe dear you can do same list of daily thinking..something positive to share... so we can learn from your lenses too.

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