Thirteen One Days Of Thoughts (Part Ii) Poem by Unwritten Soul

Thirteen One Days Of Thoughts (Part Ii)

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Day 17: The Greatest hope relies on faith (Stronger faith keep hope stronger)

Day 18: And when we think God is not with us when we need Him, Never forget we are living in His blessing, (your breath, food, sensory) … if we really can see/understand

Day 19: Each time grey clouds on my eyebrows raining on my cheeks, I will try to open my eyes wider so I let the rainbow enter and diffract into my eyes, may I get a vision to see. (We may cry but get what is behind of this pain)

Day 20: A lot of people asking me "why do I always use black paper or canvas for my painting? ".. I have many reasons, but I rarely tell that… I was thought to paint on white paper when I was a kid, and it's too common for me, also black is always refer to something undesirable and not nice.. I am proving to myself and tell others in directly that we can make something wonderful as if our dark background is our past or present life, we still can make it beautiful and colourful again… its where our mind brings it ahead.

Day 21: If you always think that you are a victim in so many situations (again and again) , I afraid that your life will be a victim by your thoughts (and action) . Don't victimize yourself, but rescue your life.

Day 22: Once upon a time, civilized people introduced money to manage their daily life, but now Civilized money showing off its power to manage human, who love it most.

Day 23: Standing in the rain with an umbrella in our hand won't protect us from rain, if we not open it and not hold it above us, we still get wet. (no matter how many helps come to us, if we didn't play our role, the help won't help)

Day 24: I don't describe how the fragrance smells; I let people to smell it themselves. That is the best way for them to evaluate not selling by my words.

Day 25: We don't see the wind but when it touching leaves (it waving) , we can see its powers, when it raises the kite up, we saw it was flying high… We can't see…but we can see the effect of its action, mysterious even in its presence…. "A sincere kindness", inspire to be kind but remain unknown

Day 26: A rich man, A great scholar, and an influential person, is nothing different than us except if their contribution is for the good cause…not for self but others.

Day 27: I may not live around with the most famous and greatest people in the world, but in my world, I do living with the most precious people I chose and proud to be with/stay… (Thanks to my family and friends)

Day 28: "Honesty, loyalty, and love", those are three things I can learn from tree's root. The root will send the water and nutrients to each of the branches and leaves, even if it (tree)is dying, the root will still working and keep supplying until a new branch/ stem grow new...
Honesty-do it sincerely
loyalty-still doing it even tree is sick
love- once the tree is flowering and fruiting, they expressed it together!


Day 29: I can't picture in my mind of the brightest star without having darkest background or sky. "all dark things in our life is nothing but a background to our success/great days... So don't look upon the darkness but bring the star to its brightest light".

Day 30: a) If I growing two trees, next to each other. After many years I know I will see they grow uniquely in a different way, beautifully different array of branches, structure, even if they are genetically identical. As I learned from trees, each life has a different storyline. Each cue we have in a life directed us into a different path, so be just when we compare our life with others because so many factors and parameters that we can't fix, and life is not simple. It raised the up and down, reasons.

b) If each of our days viewed as a petal, we may see that some of them are fine and some are imperfect, but by keeping them together, layer by layer then fold them as one, we may see it looks like a rose. See not the imperfection, but beautiful as one whole.

Day 31:
a) I can't change His design on my face. I may not look beautiful; still, I know I am blessed. But He let us design our own heart, shape our mind as what we want to be. So change something is possible for you, don't we want our heart to be beautiful too.
b) The pen's life is by the ink inside it. If the ink was used for writing something good and nice (wonderful) , it will remark its life beautifully. If it spent for writing something not good, the pen wasted its life.
Our life progress as time moves too... Like ink inside the pen, our remaining time is our chance to remark our life beautifully and not to waste.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
These are my second part for " 31 days of thoughts" that I posted in end of January. These are just only a way for myself to keep my thoughts in past 31 days in January (its like a diary of my mind/thoughts) . Though nothing it's not big and huge things but I love to share with people and readers here, you might agree and not, it just my humble words. Besides these sharing thoughts, I have many unshared thought but we all do that right, hahahaha…. Hope u not boring reading this hahahaha.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

Extraordinary piece of poem...very beautiful thoughts dear poet...

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Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

Day 26: A rich man, A great scholar, and an influential person, is nothing different than us except if their contribution is for the good cause…not for self but others. Fantastic drop of knowledge

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Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

Day 28: Honesty, loyalty, and love, those are three things I can learn from tree's root. The root will send the water and nutrients to each of the branches and leaves, even if it (tree) is dying, the root will still working and keep supplying until a new branch/ stem grow new... Honesty-do it sincerely loyalty-still doing it even tree is sick love- once the tree is flowering and fruiting, they expressed it together! Love it ❤

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Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

Our life progress as time moves too... Like ink inside the pen, our remaining time is our chance to remark our life beautifully and not to waste. Very inspiring poet...love it

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Mj Lemon 11 February 2019

So much to think about here, Soul. Day 22 and your observation about civilization addresses so much that's fundamentally good and ill with respect to human nature. Another profound piece, Soul.

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Muhammad Ali 30 May 2019

Dear soul, every thought what you pen that's every line is worthy. I am refreshed positively.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2019

Once again I visited this poem, as it says much about life and life journey. It is really a brilliant poem and great philosophical work. Thank you for sharing this gem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2019

This is a beautiful and meaningful poem so nicely delineated. The following lines are much impressive. The pen's life is by the ink inside it. If the ink was used for writing something good and nice (wonderful) , it will remark its life beautifully. If it spent for writing something not good, the pen wasted its life. Our life progress as time moves too... Like ink inside the pen, our remaining time is our chance to remark our life beautifully and not to waste.

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Rebecca Navarre 25 February 2019

Ever such beautiful thoughts and soul! .. Beautifully inspiring! .. If all could have such kind thoughts :) Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ............................+++++

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Hans Vr 21 February 2019

So filled with the blessings of our Creator. I love the thoughts expressed. Surely we walk never alone. If our Creator is with us, who can be against us. Keep writing your thoughts on a regular basis and keep sharing them. ++++

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