Through The Branches Of A Tree, I Can See Poem by Rani Turton

Through The Branches Of A Tree, I Can See

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I can see the blue sky, turning delicately shades of violet and blue; soon darkness will come,
I can see on the horizon Venus appear, the brightest star ever;
The wished-for, the longed for, by children and lovers the world over
Dusk now will dimple over her shoulder at the night, gather her robes and depart
Leaving her fragrance behind, and Night, quiet, thoughtful and profound
As lofty as a prince in a far legend from the ancient tales, will gift his heart;
Will spread his cloak over the bowl of the sky: a cloak as black as velvet
As black as his eyes and hair; it seems the Day was fair and smiling
They exist in their opposites and they attract abstractedly.

I can see through the branches of a tree the faint glimmering, the first stars that begin to shine;
What if those flickering lights were lamps lit in so many planets and stars to guide the Milky Way
The eternal intergalactic roadway that runs through the universe ever since our notions of time began to exist;
I, the dreamer, am here but for a moment. The moments stretch onto eternity, composing my existence
But these moments are transient whilst eternity is endless and eternal
Are there alien beings living in those vast cosmic spaces and is it true that they are alien?
Who came first? Me or the alien? Thus we can deduce if the alien is an alien or is it me
Alienating myself and the others and people who don’t think and speak like me


Planetary distances give pause; Plantetary beings who might be kinder, better and more beautiful:
Who haven’t a word in their language for hatred, war and bigotism
Is it possible within reason
The very thought is almost treason: for aren’t we the best of all creation?


Through the silhouette of the tree the stars are now wild and free; I can see the light of a planet
Sometimes red, blue or white as the case the might be
And that light seems to say “what you see might not be there
I might have been burned to cinders before you were born” now, how do I fit that into

My notions of the four walls of my familiar world?
The star is shining but is not really there. I exist but am I there?
Do the beings on that star who is not there see me as I am or am I not there? Or to be? Was I? Am I? Will I be?
Though even to my dreamer’s eyes my body is planted firmly under the branches of this tree.

Tell me stars, tell me cosmos, tell me Big Bang theories
Tell me within reason,
If on those planets and stars that are, but are not, or will be,
If there exists other poets like me, who are or were or will be
Looking at us through the branches of a tree.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 16 May 2008

This poem is pure enchantment. It gives the reader a glimpse of your wonderful, romantic soul. I love to think of poets on far planets gazing at earth poets through the branches of a tree. A privilege to read you, Rani. Love, Sandra

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Rema Prasanna 20 May 2008

A treat of colorful fusion, a painting and many forms of beautiful objects i could find in this work, it flows to touch the heart, a gentle feeling, a dream i could experience. Very good composition Rani,

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Louie Limosani 02 September 2008

This is a very nice poem Rani, great images. Kind regards Louie

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Kevin Wells 25 July 2008

Rani... It's good to know that there are people who don't just glance at things and shrug their shoulders but actually look at things and wonder! May I say that you and I are alike in that we don't just see the stars twinkling through the twilight tree, but look beyond it and then, beyond the sky...

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Original Unknown Girl 17 June 2008

Gosh! I'm loving this profundity Rani, you're on a roll it seems. A lot of questions and who are we indeed? Brilliant. HG: -) xx

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Lynda Robson 17 June 2008

I'm so glad you told me about this poem, it is beautiful and I like the theory that on other planets in other galaxies other forms of life could be looking through the branches of a tree and thinking, well penned,10 Lynda xxx

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 22 May 2008

profound...................

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