Deep down the oceans
Far across the sea
High above the mountains
Far across the sky
Beyond the horizon of twinkling stars
A beautiful message touched my soul.
Neither the wind carried it
Nor the words whispered it
Nor the rivulets carried it.
Golden message touched my heart
From an invisible person
Through an unknown source
It directly came from a heart!
Surprisingly it touched my heart!
Message were filled with warmthness..
Carefully the message was wrapped in rays of sunlight.
The beautiful rainbow gave a touch of glow.
The fragrance of jasmine touched its core.
But I couldn't open it's secret coded lock.
I tried desperately to open it.
To my utter surprise another message followed.
The key to open the lock.
Unfortunately, I couldn't open it.
I felt the message reached my wrong hands.
Now left with no choice
I just made a paper boat and kept the treasure box
And left it on sea and came back.
It surprised me again
A beautiful dove dropped the box and flew away.
Now, I went to forest and kept the box safely in the wood peckers nest.
Before I reached home
I saw it in my pillow.
I felt the message was following me everywhere
From day and night to wherever I go.
I couldn't understand why this happened?
Why I am afraid to grasp the fact which the message want to tell?
Is it I don't want to catch its meaning?
Is it I don't have confidence on self?
Will I loose my way after unlocking it?
Was the message strange or came from a strange heart unknown?
Is it I am too rigid to accept any change?
Before decoding the secret lock
I was flooded with many questions
This is the main reason,
I couldn't open it as it clearly mentioned keep the mind pure before opening it!
©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
©2014
keep the mind pure, the first ingredient of love, thanks. In return I am submitting my heart.
Deeply felt. Self-expression is vital for us, even to know ourselves. Thank you for your comments which encourage me. Best wishes AM
a sweet tweet again in the season of love seasonless!
Geetha, this is a fabulous write.You are maestro of love poem.I won't ever be able to write such a nice poem.
the mind pure before opening it! .. lovely line...10 keep the mind pure and doubly assure what lies for us in future? open the lock and secure
Fantastic write...Geetha, with some brilliant lines in them! ! Neither the wind carried it Nor the words whispered it Nor the rivulets carried it......... What a mysterious message! !
Carefully the message was wrapped in rays of sunlight. The beautiful rainbow gave a touch of glow. The fragrance of jasmine touched its core. A beautifully crafted poem with rich and glorious imagery. I loved the poem, every line of it. Sometimes it is better to keep things under wraps.10/10 is the least score I can commit.
Up above Down below Across rhyme Love, dove, love For this is Valentine That spells out love And unlocks love only love as pure as divine........Geetha........very very well composed...........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is real sweet in this valentine.loved it.