I came upon news edition
Wherein everything mundane,
Except the name,
Followers were distinct.
Formed by team explicit
To echo their inner voice.
Does it reach as many?
For I am not sure
Yet they existed around us
Where the news thrives in
While engaging readers in
Colorful issues.
Seeds dispersed in an air
Some turned into paddies
While some into weeds.
Journey began from a trail of thoughts
Uploaded on a paper.
Here words were shaped by sawing
While rivals weigh its intensity.
What's that special?
Made me think over and again
Success thrives in
Where you plant as many creepers
Roots goes in deeper
While the sun shines on the bearer!
© 2016 Geetha Jayakumar. All rights reserved.
Everything mundane, in the news edition except name. Wonderfully you have observed everything. Definitely journey begins from trail of thoughts. Success depends on deeper roots of words shaped. Brilliant poem on life topic is well penned is very perceptional.10
'Success thrives in Where you plant as many creepers Roots goes in deeper While the sun shines on the bearer! ' - an excellent summary of the poem.
uploaded creepers are inspirational imageries, thanks for sharing the poem with us
A wonderfully written philosophical piece, dear Geetha, That takes a great deal of talent to write poetically about such social and ultimately moral issues.
Journey begins from a trail of thoughts uploaded on a paper. Every thought beautifully put on paper shines really through out time's journey. This remains in memory. Followers may be distinct but these are tender. Many creepers are planted with sunshine. Beautiful poem this is..10
A thoughtful poem, thoughts lead us to acts and acts make our personality.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderfully expressed, a very good write, Geetha.