Visibility Poem by chandra thiagarajan

Visibility

Rating: 5.0


A dot
On a pure white apparel
Is instantly visible to the eye.
Like-wise
A wrong thought
On the mind’s apparel
Should immediately be visible to me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kavya . 12 August 2013

Wrong thought nicely compared to a dot on a white apparel

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 August 2013

Beautiful poem with deep meaning in it...I too agree with both the comments below...Loved reading it.

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R.j. Wynn 12 August 2013

Awesome, and I thank you for sharing.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 12 August 2013

very simply written, but it has a very deep meaning with very strong message and warning awesome..! ! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 August 2013

Mind’s apparel is always white. Wrong thoughts keep darkening it. Beautiful poem.

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Om Chawla 30 August 2013

Truly a wrong thought is usually 'visible' on mind's eye, but do all of us take notice of it and if so how many times.

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Ramesh Rai 21 August 2013

mind is the face of a person.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 August 2013

Good intention and more than 95% of the population openly declare this statement..Nice to read, CT..

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 August 2013

Good intention and more than 95% of the population openly declare this statement..Nice to read, CT..

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Aswath Raman 13 August 2013

And let's hope! The dot is not on a blind spot! Really sesnible write ma'am!

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