Waiting A Moon Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Waiting A Moon

Rating: 5.0


I didn't know what it was?
But beets of my heart suddenly increased!
I didn't know how it happened?
But the unexplained restlessness quickly decreased!
I didn't know where it started?
But a sun was hiding in clouds its naughty face!
I didn't know why my eyes started blinking?
But the twinkling of stars radiated a grace!
I didn't know when it will end?
But when a moon pacified their twinkling,
I knew, yes only then I knew, it's a beautiful moon,
It all happened in its prolonged waiting!

Waiting A Moon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
bri edwards 13 June 2021

So, my friend, you have 'beets' of your heart! Do you also have 'cabbages' of you mind? ? ? ? ha ha. bri ;)

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bri edwards 13 June 2021

So, Akhtar, Re your PH bio: Are you finally a 'master of allure ** '? ? [ Allure (noun) : 'power of attraction or fascination: CHARM' ] Of course you are. bri ;)

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M Asim Nehal 30 May 2021

Top stars All 5.

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M Asim Nehal 30 May 2021

Ya we all are desperately waiting for the tough time to pass and good times to reappear. Inspiring poem.

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Varsha M 29 May 2021

Yes sir waiting has its own benefits. It's worthy to have wait than loose in haste. Good poetry sir. And beautiful image.

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