His pain
For me
Disdain
Till
It
Touches my grain.
Arise
From slumber
For
His pain
His pain
Can.......................
Will be...................
Yes !
Is my pain
Maim
Maim
Maimed
By HIS pain.
The 'he' in the lines remains to be a person still to be sketched out for better analysis of what makes him. I liked your play with the chosen words and found the alliteration remarkably strengthening the short piece. Thank you for asking to comment
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sublime and to be honest an exquisite piece of poetry.Well done SIr.....