Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,860 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

War And Sin - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

As the blood drips
on the carcasses of hell
a storm draws near

The war as begun
hell is coming
for our sins


Comments about War And Sin by Dave Alan Walker

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (10/22/2012 3:27:00 AM)

    Great title and write of meaning although i think we live in it already....tyvm karen (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,566 Points Kevin Patrick (10/19/2012 6:06:00 PM)

    A dark and disturbing read, could be seen literally or metaphorically, Hell is our own creation. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Asif Andalib (10/16/2012 8:23:00 AM)

    A short but great poem against war. God bless you Dave (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,671 Points Valerie Dohren (10/12/2012 3:32:00 PM)

    I think that hell is already here Dave! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 52 Points Eric Cockrell (10/11/2012 7:36:00 PM)

    and we are both the cause and the effect! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,902 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (10/9/2012 7:07:00 PM)

    Hell is coming for our sins! You may be right, but where? on the land of poor? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 9, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 9, 2012


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