Wedding Night Of A Homeless Couple Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Wedding Night Of A Homeless Couple

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Love was growing like cuts and curves of a growing gal,
and when it became sublime she became a rare blue moon,
the ocean was in love since it saw the glimpse of a crescent.
After many dark nights the awaited message was received,
the quiet and calm ocean felt movements of a shaking tide,
particles of sand were shining like the silver ornaments,
the waves decorated by golden image of the moon,
hugged and kissed the shy bride of the thirsty beach.
The mermaids became ecstatic and started striping
throwing their shells on the wet and content settled sand.
The show that lasted for the whole moonlit night,
ended with the flash lights of the naughty sun smiling above,
opening a bag ofred aurora for collecting the diamonds.
The colorful birds flying, dancing and singing
being touched by the blows of winds full of wine.
Not only birds the buds opened their mouth
to suck the ecstasy of the winds humid enough with love,
see their dance in so many colorful aromatic costumes.
Nature is homeless; it's not confined between roofs and floors.
The poorest homeless couple having passed their wedding night
on the wet sand of a lonely beach below a moon and the stars
collected the shells lying on the sand shining in the sunlight.
Most of the shells were empty but love never leaves anyone empty handed.
You are not poor you are rich in love and I wish a dawn
in that on the beach you get a shell with the pearl of love.
Your innocent efforts and fatigues for love may bring for you
a shell with a pearl of love shining inside with heavenly glace.
Wish you a small but beautiful home with a pearl of love
crawling on the floors below the safest covers of the roof!

Friday, March 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2018

Yes, we could find home under the canopy of Mother's Nature, more beautiful than anything built with stones and marbles. What a marvelous and vivid portrayal of the beauty and wonders of nature. Yes, we are not poor we are endowed with love of Almighty beyond compare. A magnificent piece worthy of...10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2018

Growth of love undef calm moon is amazingly perceived. All waves decorated by golden image of the moon and silver ornaments are sprinkled by tender rays. This poem makes a reader. entirely emotional. First night for the homeless couple is brilliantly brought up ahead. A small but beautiful home with a pearl of love shines in poetic expression. This is excellent one...10

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Valsa George 24 March 2018

Thus you have gifted an amazing first night for the homeless couple on the wet sand under the decorated canopy of the moon lit night! The show that lasted for the whole moonlit night, ended with the flash lights of the naughty sun smiling above, ...................... Love these lines!

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Rajnish Manga 24 March 2018

The poem brings about priceless images crafted from the inputs from nature creating a perfect setting for the wedding of a homeless couple with a pearl of love and heavenly glace. Great use of metaphor and personification. Thanks, Sir.

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