What Of Passion? Poem by Fay Slimm

What Of Passion?

Rating: 5.0


Passion and judgement often wage war, bold
Reason tho', speaks to make peace, and awards
Both rudder and sail to unseasoned souls,
Who, broken by passion unchained, broaden
Pain to deep grief, as in sailing ahead
With unfettered ardour, birth more stormy,
Ill-disposed fantasy, which covets dreaded
Control. Instead, haul in fervour, to form
Anchored alliance with reason. Harbour there,
Where, touched by compassion, hearts without ire
Can flourish passionately, yet fairly act.

Willing to serve, eagerness meets desire,
Catches fire, and true rapture emerges.
Shakes free illicit lusts, then is purged,
And becomes purely ecstatic gold-dust.
Such ageless rapture will never grow old.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 18 December 2008

The final three lines of the first stanza are a great summation of the forces set in motion during the preceding lines. The poem as a whole has a fine balance to it that reads very well.

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Tom Balch 23 November 2008

Chris is right Fay, where would we be? 10 from Tom

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Kris Smith 18 November 2008

Where would we be without it in our lives great piece of poetry Fay ageless with passion you are Chris 10 Chris

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 18 November 2008

Life is all about passion, no matter the age... andrew 10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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