When I Become A Rabbit Poem by Akhtar Jawad
When I Become A Rabbit
I like loneliness at least once a weak,
it gives me wings to fly on the peak,
for rest and recreation a day one needs,
a warm up exercise for six days' deeds,
a day when I'm the monarch of house,
no interruption from a boring spouse,
no foolish questions of a lovely wife,
no noise of a woman and no strife.
I pass a day that is sunny and bright,
but when the day is melted in a night,
I start missing her, a years old habit,
and on her bell I leap like a rabbit!
Liking loneliness is too interesting in life to have perception about life in sunny bright day. Very amazing imagery is drawn here is nice....10
Loneliness for a little while to warm up for deeds- a nice thought. Thanks for sharing
everyone needs a loneliness for some time at least to rejuvenate one self for future course of action, i agree with this thought, nicely penned, thanks for sharing
Wonderfully written poem.......I liked it... a day when I'm the monarch of house, no interruption from a boring spouse, no foolish questions of a lovely wife, no noise of a woman and no strife.
Yes.... we all need sometime exclusively for ourselves! That will help us look into ourselves or relax without external interference! You have expressed a basic human need in a lovely manner here!
I spend over 99% of my time alone but I think that for the average person that is too much. The average person does need some time alone, if for no other purpose than to appreciate those whom he loves and misses. Great poem, Akhtar
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Very Nice..............10 on 10....