Why... Poem by The4amPoet ....

Why...

Rating: 5.0


i cry for you baby
i miss you all day
theres a piece of my love
thats been taken away
ive never felt
like this before
you crushed foundations
at the core
it hurts it hurts
i miss you sooooo bad
it fills me with sadness
and makes me feel mad
why did you leave
was it something i said
or did others say things
that left doubts in your head


(r4r)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 July 2011

Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'ABORTION' on page 4.

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