Why Feel Bitter When..... Poem by Lyn Paul

Why Feel Bitter When.....

Rating: 4.8


Why feel bitter when your heart feels pain
Why feel bitter when the sky brings rain
Why feel bitter when you lose all that you own
Why feel bitter if you feel you are alone
Why feel bitter when those are claiming POWER
Why feel bitter when your tears are like a shower
Why feel bitter when no one else sees wrong
Why feel bitter when your heart no longer sings that song

I guess.. Bitter... Sweet, Sweet... Sour
Love.....Hate in the darkest hour
Life is a circle, there is no door to walk away
The Bitter, sweet will not stay
The Bitter sweet will pierce your heart
Until you are ready to re start
So let The POWER take over,
They will see wrong. Not today but tomorrow
Do not be bitter Fight that pain
In Living In Life there is So Much To Gain




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Wednesday, October 23, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,inspiration,life,pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Fight that pain. There is that song.... 'I Fall Down But I get up again'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 23 October 2013

A positive affirmation to resilience and self determination against adversity and defeatist resignation, to stand and breath and face and shape in personal strength, ones own destination.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 August 2020

A powerful write with a meaningful message. Hope and the power that comes from within oneself are the forces that we need to combat the bitterness and hardships in life. Yes, life is a circle, there is no door to walk away. A powerful line from a wonderful poem.

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Annette Aitken 21 August 2016

At this moment in time I am, was feeling Bitter, but this poem has inspired me to just let it go...let go of the bitterness. Thank you so much for writting such powerful words.... Annette

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 April 2016

When our heart feel pain! Thanks for sharing.

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Kanav Justa 03 December 2013

... nice message for the readers... liked it...

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Amitava Sur 27 October 2013

A nice write up with two phases. With the apprehensions along with solutions.... very nice

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