Will thou love me come the'morrow
As you did in yesteryear,
For my heart is full of sorrow;
Tell me, tell me, my sweet dear.
If I falter when I'm walking
And my hair is gray and thin;
If I struggle when I'm talking
Will you love me, even then?
When I am weary, worn and bent,
With life's passions burned away
And earthly time is nearly spent,
Will you love me on that day?
Hush! My dear I 'eer shall love you
Come what pitfalls are in store;
Those precious vows, which I renew
Shall remain, forevermore.
Ageing love is equally beautiful as the twilight hues and the pastel shade of the evening! ! There is a youthful lover in you sir and age hasn't dialuted or impaired it a bit! A wonderful love song! !
Aha sir dis is an adorable poem in lovely rhyme n if u ask yor love im sure she had find dis equally endearing. U can read mine too mayb u had like one.
Joe, this is awesome bud, look at all these darlings below me wooing you!
Joseph, you touched here on the essentials of love. Being IN love is infatuation that comes and goes but Love (without the 'in') is something completely different. It is the lovely things we do for each other and the feeling follows.The more we give in such a 'LOVE' the more we get. You wrote here in very melodious words and in excellent rhyme one of the fantastic aspects of true love. Excllent work, Joseph, very inspiring.
beautifully written Joseph. and I am sure she will love you forever. a sweet read
Absolutely beautiful, and such a pleasure to read. PS: I've written one with the same title. If you find time, please check it out. Thanks.
Beautiful poem Joseph. The flesh is indeed weak, but the spirit is indestructible.
I agree with this very lovely write Joe. As we all grow older and we surely will our outlook on love itself should get better. Eyesight may dim and miss every whim, Walking may be slow as we all know, love may grow old but still stands bold. Love never fails. Oh how I love thee let me count the ways. These words are a womans dream. Made my heart flutter. Truly enjoyed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Simply beautiful Joseph - love it, my kinda write! ! Definitely a 10.