Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 7,545 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Wish me Luck!


Each of us is put to test
everyday and every time.
Each question appear in a flash of time
But each answer is unique in its own way.
You can cut, copy and paste also.

The more you peep in others paper
the more frustrated you will be
As you will feel others answer is so simple
that you can fix in no time.
But others may also feel the same for you.

Once you press submit button
you cannot click it back.
The answer is like an arrow
when released from a bow
it is sure to hit the target where you choose to.
You cannot erase the answer
but you can rectify it by logical action.

Every one have to pass through the test.
The answer should be yours
Else some one else will take control of your answer.

It's like riding a horse.
Riding is smooth as long as
you take control of the horse.
But once you loose the control then
The horse will take control of your life too.
It will take you where it want to go and
If you resist then horse will make you fall too.

Then all you can say is
'My life in horse hands'

All I can tell is
BEST OF LUCK for the ride of life
and WISH ME LUCK too.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Submitted: Thursday, August 01, 2013
Edited: Friday, October 31, 2014

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  • Gold Star - 7,475 Points Amitava Sur (7/3/2014 9:13:00 AM)

    Geetha - thank for presenting such a such a penning with so many ifs and buts but ultimately you came out with the gist that this path of life is uncertain and I wish you all good luck (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,172 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/27/2014 9:45:00 PM)

    Answer depends upon the question. Lovely questions get lovely answers. But when a foolish question is replied in a lovely manner the student under a test becomes superior to the paper setter. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Emeyazia Iwe Chukwudi (8/5/2013 10:53:00 AM)

    You have done it again. I wished you luck. Well done, Geetha. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,595 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/4/2013 9:24:00 PM)

    But each answer is unique in its own way... nicely portrayed.. good poem....10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 694 Points Shahzia Batool (8/2/2013 7:59:00 PM)

    fine analogy geetha: Riding is smooth as long as
    you take control of the horse.
    But once you loose the control then
    The horse will take control of your life too.

    wishing you the best! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,639 Points Dave Walker (8/2/2013 3:20:00 PM)

    Life can have it's ups and downs, but if we grasp the ride with both hands
    we have a chance to be who we want to be. A great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 280 Points Rajendran Muthiah (8/2/2013 5:06:00 AM)

    Excellent. Ride of life is like riding a horse. When you lose control, the horse takes it. Beautiful idea and images.
    ***** (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,723 Points Heather Wilkins (8/1/2013 3:23:00 PM)

    once we have control of the horse we must remain in control. that is the way life is. good write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,515 Points Neela Nath (8/1/2013 9:19:00 AM)

    Good one and a piece of wisdom.Loved. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,198 Points Ramesh Rai (8/1/2013 8:37:00 AM)

    i like your opinion liked your write.if we peep into others make more frustrated (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,198 Points Ramesh Rai (8/1/2013 8:36:00 AM)

    i like your opinion liked your write.if we peep into others make more frustrated (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,683 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/1/2013 8:29:00 AM)

    The answer is like an arrow
    when released from a bow
    It cannot be taken back like email sent at the click of a button. Beautiful poem. Have a great ride. Best of luck. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 28,783 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/1/2013 7:55:00 AM)

    For the ride of life wish you good luck, great write. (Report) Reply

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