X..... Snow Poem by Aufie Zophy

X..... Snow

Rating: 3.5


On my way home at night in the car,
I have to travel still a distance, quite far
Thick flakes in the sky causing some fear
praying for safety for me and my family, dear.

But somehow along the slow ride,
A big joy props up from inside
The peace of the dancing flakes in the night
A feast for the eye, impeccably white.

Some wonderfully sculpted flakes hit the screen of my car
looking like diamonds, the shape of a star
The heat in my car makes them melt all too fast
How I wish, a little longer they’d last

With my eyes kept safely on the road,
I cannot keep out of mind the lovely thought
of waking after the night in the midst of an exquisite sight
with branches of trees in a tight dress of bright white.


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 10 September 2014

Beautiful write. invite you to read my poem FLOWER IN SNOW.

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Patti Masterman 20 July 2011

The last lines are so lovely. I admit I have been pining for snow in the enormous heat this year. They are calling it a 'heat dome' alas. I would like to get outside of the dome but I guess that is unlikely at best.

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Shadow Girl 04 July 2011

Beautiful - warms my heart! Brings back memories - i haven't seen the snow in 20 years...not much of it here is Australia - SG

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Malaya Roses 26 March 2011

Winter and the feeling about it was written in a smooth way and i like it. Your poem made me cry for winter...lovely white & heavenly snow! ! Excellent.

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