Vijay Sai

Rookie - 58 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Yellow Bird - Poem by Vijay Sai

An yellow bird
In rainbow feathers
Pecking strawberry fruit
Smelling jasmine flowers
Beads so bold
Looking here and there
Singing solitary sonnets
Why so pensive
Is your soliloquy?
Scintillating singer you are
Sing your lullabies
We want to rest our souls!


Comments about Yellow Bird by Vijay Sai

  • Gold Star - 16,823 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/2/2014 12:23:00 PM)

    Simply wonderful' beautiful and soulful..................Vijay...................... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 22,327 Points * Sunprincess * (11/11/2012 10:59:00 PM)

    love hearing the birds chirping when i am laying down resting
    also..spring is the best time to open the window., especially
    early in the day..just like a symphony so nice to hear..fabulous. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kisaka Mawuza (5/10/2011 12:22:00 PM)

    wawoo, it's such nice poem, i relate it to the human life on earth for the goodies. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,936 Points Marieta Maglas (7/21/2010 3:26:00 PM)

    A thought -provoking poem. Thnx for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gan Chennai (5/24/2010 7:15:00 AM)

    Nice Poem, I have enjoyed it in reality. I have recorded these sweet melodious voices in my mobile also together with the Paper Buyer shouting 'Paaaaaaaper, Paiiiiiiiiiiiper'. That is also interesting. Everything natural is so so so wonderful whether it is Bird singing or Paper Buyer shouting. We should know to enjoy. It's all in the Mind. You have it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Adnan Khalifeh (5/19/2010 8:07:00 AM)

    Nice picture...Thank you.
    Adnan, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Soraka Starchild (5/12/2010 8:07:00 PM)

    This is a good poem, keep writing :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sexy & Single **Amber Rainer** (4/23/2010 8:21:00 AM)

    nice poem i liked and for a guy your not a bad writer at all lol but keep writting and i will keep reading :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joseph Vincent Orlanda (4/23/2010 4:08:00 AM)

    the topic is simple, yet effective...nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Brock (4/21/2010 8:01:00 AM)

    Beautifully written with intense and clear meaning. A good flow, and visual wording,

    thanks for sharing
    Michael (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jodie Pollock (4/21/2010 7:28:00 AM)

    i like the last line.. sounds like your tired of whatever is happening and want it to end so you can rest.. very emotional and i imagine a very pretty picture.. thank you for sharing.. well done x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tshering Tobgay (4/20/2010 6:38:00 AM)

    well written, thumps up and do keep on writing................ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie CourtneyJae noggle (4/19/2010 2:59:00 PM)

    big words so it was confusing for me...but it was good (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Kolawole Ajao (4/19/2010 9:39:00 AM)

    Nice poem, nice lineation. Change the first word in the first line to A(if you like.) You can leave it like that if you want(remember poets have what is called poetic licence?) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Yll L (4/18/2010 9:32:00 AM)

    yellow bird...
    how lonely that critter...hoping it can find a branch to stay... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (4/17/2010 8:35:00 PM)

    The opening word really should be 'a.' This is the only error as such. The virtue of this piece is that it is very short and concise. Though it might even be shorter still. The best poetry is 'almost' always the shortest. You might want to look at this poem with that in mind. The problem, of course, is that beauty is sometimes sacrificed in this process. Whatever you do though, you never sacrifice beauty in order to shorten a poem. So. my advice is to take your time examining your poem to satisfy yourself that you cannot shorten it without sacrificing beauty. If you find you can't, then leave it as it is. It is a well done piece of writing as it is. My compliments to you. -- Greenwolfe 1962 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Guardian of Night (4/17/2010 3:06:00 PM)

    This is a very good poem. I know that my friends 'He Who Is Called Death, Girl Who Lives In Hell, Lunar Phantom, and The Devil From Hell' will love to read it. They love these kind of poems. You should read a few of there's, I think you'll like them. Maybe you could read some of my poems. They are really good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Claire Hunter (4/17/2010 2:37:00 PM)

    very poetic, obviously, i liked it 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Poetic Soul (4/17/2010 2:31:00 PM)

    Well written...has a nice imagery. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 17, 2010



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