Vijay Sai

Rookie - 465 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Happy New Year - Poem by Vijay Sai

Second by second minute ends
Minute by minute hour ends
Hour by hour day ends
Day by day week ends
Week by week month ends
Month by month year ends
Though every year ends
Second by second minute begins
Minute by minute hour begins
Hour by hour day begins
Day by day week begins
Week by week month begins
Month by month year begins
Prompting us to perceive
Every end has a new beginning!


Comments about Happy New Year by Vijay Sai

  • (1/4/2013 11:16:00 AM)


    It reads like a concrete poem It is brilliant.. It is cool. But it charges the reader with an optimistic view of life. Happy New Year Dear Poet (Report) Reply

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  • Drew Williams (1/1/2013 11:53:00 AM)


    I love it! That was great! (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2012 5:33:00 PM)


    It was like you had made the geography of time into a matryoshka doll, with every moment becoming a precedents for the next, showing that infinity can be stretched to a simple moment and fabricated as a false perception of our existence. Time is Now and only Now all other points are ephemeral. A fascinating read with a deep philosophical undercurrent.
    Could cause a head ache but definitly worth it
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  • Yogini Dawar (12/29/2012 9:39:00 AM)


    good one...it was a sensible poem. (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2012 5:04:00 AM)


    fantastic poem on new year.. I really enjoyed readng it.: -) (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2012 5:52:00 AM)


    simple but effective with a great message! (Report) Reply

  • (12/11/2012 6:52:00 AM)


    An enjoyable and revealing poem (Report) Reply

  • Joses Tirtabudi (12/31/2011 5:33:00 AM)


    Hi Vijay, you requested me to comment on your poem, so I'll give you my genuine feeling about it. It has a powerful message behind it, however, I found that it was a bit too repetitious. Perhaps breaking it up with different words would make it more riveting.
    Best wishes and Happy New Year! :)

    Joses
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  • (5/24/2010 5:51:00 AM)


    Nice wordings. Top notch Spiritual Leaders say Time is illusion. All that is is this moment only, which is eternal. Try catching the space between thoughts, a thoughtless state and stay there. If you could capture that moment you have achieved everything, Eternal Happiness. (Report) Reply

  • (1/18/2010 9:58:00 AM)


    you know the art of presenting complex realities in simple manner
    10/10
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  • (1/5/2010 12:54:00 AM)


    very nice poem i like it 10 on 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (1/2/2010 9:49:00 PM)


    a good thouhjt in good way is put.10 marks (Report) Reply

  • (1/2/2010 5:09:00 AM)


    a cute poem... keep it up.................... rgrds sree (Report) Reply

  • (1/1/2010 5:35:00 AM)


    you have drawn the circle very well...happy new year (Report) Reply

  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (1/1/2010 2:06:00 AM)


    thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing 10 (Report) Reply

  • Meggie Gultiano (12/31/2009 10:28:00 PM)


    A nice write..Happy new Year, too (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2009 10:22:00 PM)


    I like how you showed the concept of the begginging in every end. I think it goes deeper than most people think. (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2009 10:16:00 PM)


    nice poem happy new year 10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/31/2009 1:01:00 PM)


    Very nice thought. You put it well, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 31, 2009



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