Vijay Sai

Rookie - 57 Points (30 12 1975 / Trichy, South India)

Happy New Year - Poem by Vijay Sai

Second by second minute ends
Minute by minute hour ends
Hour by hour day ends
Day by day week ends
Week by week month ends
Month by month year ends
Though every year ends
Second by second minute begins
Minute by minute hour begins
Hour by hour day begins
Day by day week begins
Week by week month begins
Month by month year begins
Prompting us to perceive
Every end has a new beginning!


Comments about Happy New Year by Vijay Sai

  • Rookie - 282 Points Dr. Ramesh Mukhopadhyaya (1/4/2013 11:16:00 AM)

    It reads like a concrete poem It is brilliant.. It is cool. But it charges the reader with an optimistic view of life. Happy New Year Dear Poet (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Drew Williams (1/1/2013 11:53:00 AM)

    I love it! That was great! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,914 Points Kevin Patrick (12/31/2012 5:33:00 PM)

    It was like you had made the geography of time into a matryoshka doll, with every moment becoming a precedents for the next, showing that infinity can be stretched to a simple moment and fabricated as a false perception of our existence. Time is Now and only Now all other points are ephemeral. A fascinating read with a deep philosophical undercurrent.
    Could cause a head ache but definitly worth it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Yogini Dawar (12/29/2012 9:39:00 AM)

    good one...it was a sensible poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Zeenat Fatima (12/29/2012 5:04:00 AM)

    fantastic poem on new year.. I really enjoyed readng it.: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emily Stroud (12/26/2012 5:52:00 AM)

    simple but effective with a great message! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 65 Points Meera Panigrahi (12/11/2012 6:52:00 AM)

    An enjoyable and revealing poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 130 Points Joses Tirtabudi (12/31/2011 5:33:00 AM)

    Hi Vijay, you requested me to comment on your poem, so I'll give you my genuine feeling about it. It has a powerful message behind it, however, I found that it was a bit too repetitious. Perhaps breaking it up with different words would make it more riveting.
    Best wishes and Happy New Year! :)

    Joses (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gan Chennai (5/24/2010 5:51:00 AM)

    Nice wordings. Top notch Spiritual Leaders say Time is illusion. All that is is this moment only, which is eternal. Try catching the space between thoughts, a thoughtless state and stay there. If you could capture that moment you have achieved everything, Eternal Happiness. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gul naz (1/18/2010 9:58:00 AM)

    you know the art of presenting complex realities in simple manner
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aprajita Rana (1/5/2010 12:54:00 AM)

    very nice poem i like it 10 on 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,942 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (1/2/2010 9:49:00 PM)

    a good thouhjt in good way is put.10 marks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Sreejith Kulaparambil (1/2/2010 5:09:00 AM)

    a cute poem... keep it up.................... rgrds sree (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (1/1/2010 5:35:00 AM)

    you have drawn the circle very well...happy new year (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 61 Points PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (1/1/2010 2:06:00 AM)

    thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 47 Points Meggie Gultiano (12/31/2009 10:28:00 PM)

    A nice write..Happy new Year, too (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jane Meyer (12/31/2009 10:22:00 PM)

    I like how you showed the concept of the begginging in every end. I think it goes deeper than most people think. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (12/31/2009 10:16:00 PM)

    nice poem happy new year 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fred Babbin (12/31/2009 1:01:00 PM)

    Very nice thought. You put it well, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 31, 2009



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