You** Poem by Milica Franchi De Luri

You**

Rating: 5.0


You are alone
you drift in this great big see
on your own.
you don't even have a phone.
You are lonely
as lonely as you would be
if you were
in this world one only.
You are sad
Everyone thinks you are mad.
You are in pain
that is all you have gained.
You are going to die
i am not going to cry
on your grave i will dance
in my red high hills
you never gave me a chance
Now you are alone
alone
alone
alone...... sweet song.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 17 October 2009

mark 10 nicely words are used. correction: big see = big sea. shan

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Ramin Chaman 16 October 2009

Hi Milica O heart complain not about the congealed times which look like a rose-bud for' morning breeze will loosen such knots be hopeful... Ramin

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 October 2009

Is it poetic soliloquizing with Poetic self? Ten Ms Nivedita New post: Lie Sly or other poems if you kindly read and comment. niv

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Patti Masterman 09 October 2009

Wow, I just adore one line though it's all wonderful: 'on your grave i will dance in my red high hills'. Might be a dance line forming behind you; you never can tell..(smile)

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Robart Frocheart 01 October 2009

There is magic here...I think...'alone' is your knife with which you wound..twist...then it becomes a bit of a butterknife...magic! see ya down the road sjc

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