Treasure Island

Unwritten Soul


You and I


Written love in the sky
We did in glory time
When i had you
And you always have me

Be one
You and I
We now be together again
As we have written a promise
Something that unbroken by time
We climbed to the moon
And hides our secrets
It does shine still
Stay in bliss
Because you believe in me
No reason for me for you to leave

You and I
Like those stars there
Millions of memories we shared
Permanently in full phase
Safe in my heart place
No other place to keep
Have to dive in me deep
Impossible to erase
Because my heart is your place
To remember all again each second we together
Treasure scent of Joy, smiles and laughter
Even in sad our day still enjoyable
Amnesia could never cross over
These memories you keep in your death
I'll taste this sweet until my last breathe

You and I
Forever
We both know
Love never turn away
This built our own days
Just in own simply ways
And no perfect word can say
It just was a perfect world everyday
When you and I be there at the moon's bay

You and I
Sealed our oath
For only loves come close
Just forgiveness we need if you i hurt
Somehow there is no way for me to do it
Trust me as we bury our promise in the moon
Because you ensure me a meaning of kindness
As you said love always forgiving
Then i know the oath we keep in depth
As it deeper to anyone to dive
As you again still alive

Life never reverse
I am glad I had you to share all
When I was young, from you i learned
Loves, care and wisdom..if i am universe
Mystery it is but shine me all

Together we are a day,
living a memory under the same sky
As if I am the dark night
Pleased us with the black blanket sky and shiny stars
While you ahead me as a bright day
Oh your day and my night prime
We maybe separated by space and time
As love reunite
When we together, we be perfect one
To be a complete day
Like night and day
As you and I

And
Loves
You and I
Forever this way

Submitted: Wednesday, July 28, 2010
Edited: Monday, September 23, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Written specially to my late grandparents,
wonderful day is everyday, the moment i can spend time with you all
_Unwritten Soul

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  • Frank James Davis (4/12/2013 3:19:00 AM)

    Grandparents are, unfortunately, often overlooked, and too quickly forgotten.
    You will be blessed, Soul, for remembering to honor them.
    Heartwarming! (Report) Reply

  • Praneeth Remidi (7/14/2012 9:49:00 PM)

    You just a bright day and I am night prime
    We maybe separated by space and time
    but together we are one
    To be a complete day..........

    These are wonderful lines.... goes like a lyric..... thank you for the poem! (Report) Reply

  • Harindhar Reddy (3/14/2012 10:41:00 AM)

    Reading your poem is perfect treat as it is like watching Niagara fall s from close proximity. You and I make a promise..... What start to the poem, It is fascinating to read such sensitive poems especially when human values are under threat............. A loud cheers to the poet soul!
    With Heart and soul...... (Report) Reply

  • Harindhar Reddy (3/14/2012 10:37:00 AM)

    Reading your poem is perfect treat as it is like watching Niagara fall s from close proximity. You and I make a promise..... What start to the poem, It is fascinating to read such sensitive poems especially when human values are under threat............. A loud cheers to the poet soul!
    With Heart and soul...... (Report) Reply

  • Batool Abdulhafid (1/26/2012 8:39:00 AM)

    So inspiring poem. I liked the last part [ You are a day,
    live under a cloudy blue sky
    and I am the dark night
    Blanket by the black sky and shiny stars] Its like saying that each one of you complete the other one, Day and Night! (Report) Reply

  • Lawrence H (1/13/2012 5:31:00 AM)

    Good layout poem and easy to read....very romantic poem if ones read aloud to the loved one..I rated this poem 8/10. (Report) Reply

  • Cristina Teodor (9/25/2011 8:24:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem and i like so much end of poem, the unity you have created between 'day' and ' night' as among 'you and i', an universal, indestructible bond..Cristina Teodor (Report) Reply

  • Rekha Mandagere (3/16/2011 12:24:00 AM)

    The concept of sweet memories, responsibilities, oaths centered around a Relationship is beautifully expressed in this poem. I really appreciate the technique of implementation of an abstract idea through a well designed process. (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (10/19/2010 8:56:00 PM)

    Good poem and well exposed relation with the dearest one. Love and live....the ultimate wisdom could be the reach of a social human being. Write more......run long and excavate your soul to write.........10/10

    Regards,
    pranab (Report) Reply

  • Aranthabailu Ummar (9/23/2010 2:34:00 AM)

    for the same feelig i walked across the jungs for four years
    when i prayed with god to be with complete but i spent four years alone
    becaus my oath and compassion for only one.
    Still now she is away from me

    Be a nice poem
    with warm
    A Ummar (Report) Reply

  • Kevin Carney (9/21/2010 1:04:00 AM)

    You are a day,
    live under a cloudy blue sky
    and I am the dark night
    dressed in black sky with shiny stars
    incomplete and separately by time
    but we are one as a complete day

    Beautiful lines, these words have so much meaning and yet will mean something different by others. This set of lines hit me and are beautifully written. Your whole poem is so beautifully written and so universal even though you wrote for your grandparents. I can take it in other ways. (Report) Reply

  • Terence George Craddock (9/19/2010 5:53:00 AM)

    You and I
    Share millions of memories
    Permanently in full phase
    impossible to erase...

    these are powerful universal lines of insight (Report) Reply

  • Dash Black (9/15/2010 1:28:00 AM)

    There z great power and rythm when u get closer to the end...together we are one...i liked that one.beautiful! dats da 1st poem av read by u unwritten soul bt am impressed. (Report) Reply

  • Dwi Utami (8/27/2010 10:41:00 PM)

    Hi girl you have good art.
    Good in setag meaninful words in love.
    Everyone also had the love.
    And you had the love in your poem.
    This is really beautiful and nice write.
    The love indeed never ending.
    Keep always your love and your romance poem.
    10+i like romance tanks (Report) Reply

  • Samantha Collins (8/4/2010 4:26:00 PM)

    beautiful poem.

    favortie part;
    'You and I
    make an oath
    for hates never to come close
    Just forgiveness we need
    if you keep it
    there is no reason to get hurt'
    so simple, but so true.

    awesoe jpb, soild 10.

    keep writting (: (Report) Reply

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