Unwritten Soul


You Are Someone (We Love) - Poem by Unwritten Soul

A drop of tears
Flood all over the world
And we cant run but drown
Because we stuck in a time
Believing of something
We are no one, no one
Will we survive?
When few drops down
Will we survive?

Tell,
Tell everything you've felt
Living in a sweet dream as another
Dream to be just like him and her
Wake up as living nightmare as self
And well,
Everything in my words tell to stay
For you there is no life in others
To dream if we as him or her
We branded as someone else
Created in bigger dreams
Tell love, well loved

Wild hearts,
If we ever wear inside
Can be tamed too just control its flame
Too high! we maybe cant be that sparkling star
Just at the bottom of the world, but own gems inside
There always time for any seeds grow be trees
Life sound be same not by revolution
Change for chances
New brave hearts

A drop of tears
Flood all over the world
And we cant run but drown
Because we stuck in a time
Believing of something
We are no one, no one
Will we survive?
When few drops down
Will we survive?

Yes, we could be

I maybe not a ship to float
Not wish to be a survivor mermaid
But i could be a captain to sail with will
In this adventurous life, the way i order
As we dream not be someone we couldn't
Just be self, we are someone else
Trusted brand as ourselves
We re someone (somebody)
The precious one


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem called 'You are someone (Weloveyou) ' is a poem that plead
people to love themselves as they are, no matter how you looked, living poor-rich, educated, troublesome as past, or maybe not good as other i just hope we remember each of us is a Brand life, what we need is to make the Brand not overshadow by others by giving out the best as we can and there was a time, when i was too lil i always wish to be someone else just because i afraid of thing and others already passed it..so i wished to be them not self, but when it's my turn...i told myself no matter what i own this and i cant be others so just prove that we are also just like them...maybe if our past is not great it never mean our future is black, not everything is closed for us, there always opportunities in anything happened so we must good to take this advantages to manipulate situation, never let situation manipulate us to be something that never help us at all. We live as ourselves now just once so if we giving up, what left for us? ? I believe who ever you are, we are the new brand to compete in life market, be creative and let fight to sell our voices in a good way(~_') _Soul

Comments about You Are Someone (We Love) by Unwritten Soul

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (7/25/2013 2:19:00 PM)

    how can we love others if we do not love ourselves.? a wonderful powerful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 352 Points Captain Cur (5/1/2013 5:49:00 AM)

    Your poems and prose are both powerful and send a clear strong message.
    If we love ourselves as we are, it does not matter what others think of us,
    because our core value is intact and impenetrable. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Shadow Girl (4/12/2013 11:10:00 PM)

    Beautiful lil soul xxx (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,287 Points Xelam Kan™ (4/11/2013 2:32:00 AM)

    hats off.... for notes, not for poem
    your prose is more powerfull than your verse....
    refine it.... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (4/5/2013 7:06:00 AM)

    Tis so much fun being the Joker, said the riddler to the clown!
    Which one are we today?
    I don't know yet, let's just say it's unwritten. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (4/4/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    great poem just like as ever dear soul.
    this poem is telling the right tacts but let me add sth to it.
    sure its not true to be some one else but we may desire to take some one's position or what he or she has gained through his/her life.even to be better than them.it doesnt mean desire to be someone else, does it?
    I raise a question here.
    If we dont push ourselves how would we improve?
    kudos(hahah yes it s a chocolate for me, i swallowed it) ~nb (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,769 Points Paul Brookes (4/3/2013 1:15:00 PM)

    Just be yourself which you truly are Soul Loved it thanks for sharing. BB : O) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,714 Points Neela Nath (4/3/2013 9:34:00 AM)

    One of the best poems from your pen. I enjoyed it very much, Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 31 Points Jinal Oswal (4/3/2013 8:26:00 AM)

    Hi Soul, hope you doing great. Reading the poem I think you are doing wonderful. A real great thought shared by you. Wonderfully conveyed. Your pen just strikes the right chords. Keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,839 Points Valsa George (4/2/2013 12:17:00 PM)

    Yes, we can be Captains to sail at will! Weare the navigators of our own life! We never grow by pining to be someone else. Great thoughts beautifully expressed! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Frank James Davis (4/2/2013 10:56:00 AM)

    A lovely inspiration, Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (4/2/2013 6:30:00 AM)

    its important for all of us to be ourselves and make our own futures. Make our way. Our ideas will be shown to the future. We have unique opinions and souls but sometimes there is no chance. Well done
    Nice one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (4/2/2013 6:29:00 AM)

    its important for all of us to be ourselves and make our own futures. Make our way. Our ideas will be shown to the future. We have unique opinions and souls but sometimes there is no chance. Well done
    Nice one (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,677 Points Anthony Di''anno (4/1/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    Wonderful Unwritten Soul. A very passionate and compassionate plea for humans to forgive and to love themselves. I would love to know your thoughts on my poem 'Calling All Christians and Other Interested Beings.'
    Thank you for your beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,679 Points Valerie Dohren (3/31/2013 1:43:00 PM)

    As Shakespeare said To thine own self be true - great philosophy Soul, and beautifully expressed in your poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 31, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, March 7, 2014


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