A twinkling star glided unto me
Like thy enchanted look.
A flood of moonlight
Swept over me
Like thy enchanted kiss.
A wave of melody filled my heart
Like thy honey sweet voice.
A wave of solitude
Disappeared from my life
As thee began to whisper within me.
And now, time gently flows,
The brook hath left the dales.
I see a smiling face
Where dwells impressions of a dream,
Where my ardent thoughts gently sleep.
Thou art out of my vales;
Thou art out of my springs.
Yet I feel contended-
Thee hath gifted to my boyhood winds
A whispering poem for the rest of my sojourn.
This is an extremely well written poem.. nice
A whispering poem for the rest of my sojourn....sometimes dreamt thoughts caress our souls...words are strung with proper fragrance...skillful
Impeccable - Language, Words, Verse, Weave & flow of thought and of couse a beautiful and lovely poem - soft, sweet and sad!
your writing is superb always. This poem is a marvellous conjuction of poetry and reflection. Nature is so beautifully wedded to your poetic thoughts, that I have read the poem twice or thrice. Write a lot of them. plz read my comment on you as a poet.
A twinkling star glided unto me Like thy enchanted look. Rachel Ann Butler
‘Where my ardent thoughts gently sleep.’ What a line? Poet Sir enjoyed much The+ dr. sakti Please read my Amnesia 1-5
hey really wonderfull language. wonderfull theme. well penned. posted 10 love surya
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
that was an excellent write...th flow of the poem was very good