Hold me tender as I slumber
Stay beside me while I sleep
Be forever in my dreaming
Keep me close lest I should weep
Soothe my anguish in the morning
Ease my heart from noontime care
Then as twilight grows upon me
Promise that you'll still be there
So remain before the darkness
Touches all this troubled mind
Linger in the night's cold shadows
All my heartache to unbind
Hold me tender as I slumber
Rescue me from solitude
Stay with me until the morning
When the day be then renewed
This is a beautiful poem. It emanates a feeling of tender love. Has to have been written from experience. First class.
Your beautiful heart forever healing Valerie. Your memories to be cherished.
Lovely words indeed sure are tender and for sure the request will be lovingly granted...love is a poem like this a pleasure to read...regards
A beautiful poem on the sadness that sometimes we feel in life.Sometimes we feel lonely and disinterested in life. Very nicely crafted to make it touching. 'So remain before the darkness Touches all this troubled mind Linger in the night's cold shadows All my heartache to unbind'.. is a nice stanza. Loved it.
Very passionate plea for hopeful understanding, wanting to be renewed somehow without going through the intense solitude of loss. Totally squeezed my heart like a sponge filled with painful tears. Awesome poem with a symphony of sadness surrounding it. Great poem, Valerie. Love it. RoseAnn
Hold me tender as I slumber Rescue me from solitude Stay with me until the morning When the day be then renewed An excellent poem declaring the pain of soul which increases more with the torture of loneliness but great like you are those who forebear and share it.Well done. This poem has really taken my heart away. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Soul needs to be rescued from solitude. A passionate plea delivered in a beautiful poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A passionate plea.... A touching request.... in all poetic beauty! 'Linger in the night's cold shadows'...... Beautiful line!