Amitava Chakraborty Comments

- On Sat,14/2/09, Eli wrote: From: Eli Subject: Re: [creative_writing] AUTOBIOGRAPHY OF A DEPENDANT BROOK To: [email protected] Date: Saturday,14 February,2009,5: 52 PM Greetings. I understand what youre trying to do here, re: assonance rhyming e.g. bee/sea, plate/straight and alternate syllabic verse, i.e. the way the stanza has a rhythm. If this is an experiment, well done. Be brave. OL.

- On Tue,6/1/09, erikestabrookforreals wrote: From: erikestabrookforreals Subject: Re: IN SEARCH OF ENLIGHTENMENT Date: Tuesday,6 January,2009,8: 49 PM this was intense with very strong words, and when I read it its a complex poem, following so many paths for one poem, I enjoyed it thank you

- On Sun,4/1/09, Dudley Hiles wrote: From: Dudley Hiles Subject: Re: [creative_writing] GO BACK TO NATURE To: [email protected] Date: Sunday,4 January,2009,1: 46 AM I read everything of yours, but have not posted to them yet. Your a very good-no a superb poet in my opinion. Keep writing...

- On Sat,3/1/09, Dudley Hiles wrote: From: Dudley Hiles Subject: Re: [creative_writing] GO BACK TO NATURE To: [email protected] Date: Saturday,3 January,2009,7: 34 AM I love your writing, and never miss a post. You remind me of John Updike, ever read him? ?

- On Sun,28/12/08, Dudley Hiles wrote: From: Dudley Hiles Subject: Re: [creative_writing] ALIEN I TODAY To: [email protected] Date: Sunday,28 December,2008,8: 52 AM Stunning work. I would of been impressed with half the stanzas. I'm glad you write, its a gift I'm enjoying.

- On Fri,26/12/08, Dudley Hiles wrote: From: Dudley Hiles Subject: Re: [creative_writing] DREAM AWAKEN To: [email protected] Date: Friday,26 December,2008,1: 01 AM Please post more of your writing, I feel cheated if I missed any.

- On Mon,22/12/08, rastafarimami wrote: From: rastafarimami Subject: (TPS) Darkness To: [email protected] Date: Monday,22 December,2008,4: 11 PM i respect your thinking.very strong writing.try to post more

- On Sun,7/12/08, Pauline Hamilton wrote: From: Pauline Hamilton Subject: [creative_writing] Darkness To: [email protected] Date: Sunday,20 December,2008,4: 45 PM Very good writing, i like it.keep posting

- On Tue,16/12/08, Kay Sparks wrote: From: Kay Sparks Subject: Re: Darkness To: 'sarkar_papia' Date: Tuesday,16 December,2008,11: 01 PM Interesting write, Sparkule

- On Thu,27/11/08, mail4bams wrote: From: mail4bams Subject: [creative_writing] Re: Expectation To: [email protected] Date: Thursday,27 November,2008,2: 10 PM `Expectation is sweeter than execution'-known to all, So love we get in counting for the expected moment forgetting consequence. I guess i find truth in these words. Good write. ...My aimless sketching plays on the canvas of mesmeric emotion... Been there, done that... no t-shirt though: -) Again, good write.

- On Thu,25/12/08, Dee Hurst wrote: From: Dee Hurst Subject: Re: [creative_writing] Dream Awaken To: [email protected] Date: Thursday,25 December,2008,10: 26 AM Great writing.Am surprised.How could you think like this.really great.keep posting. thanks,

- On Wed,24/12/08, Pauline Hamilton wrote: From: Pauline Hamilton Subject: [creative_writing] Dream Awaken To: [email protected] Date: Wednesday,24 December,2008,12: 28 PM Very strong, good writing.try to post more. thanks

- On Tue,20/1/09, Gul Noor wrote: From: Gul Noor Subject: Re: [creative_writing] A TALE OF GREAT SACRIFICE To: [email protected] Date: Tuesday,20 January,2009,10: 26 PM its really good. are u a poet by profesiion?

- On Tue,20/1/09, Dudley Hiles wrote: From: Dudley Hiles Subject: Re: [creative_writing] A TALE OF GREAT SACRIFICE To: [email protected] Date: Tuesday,20 January,2009,10: 51 PM Your a superb poet.... Stunning work.

-- Forwarded Message - From: Poemhunter.Com To: Amitava Chakraborty Sent: Friday,6 March,2009 9: 44: 03 AM Subject: You've got a new reader comment You have a new comment about your poem: THE LAST FRONT -------- a wonderful poem stressing the futility and conditions of war....should you get a chance.visit my poem ''To High A Price'' and ''Short Is The Distance'' thanks Barry