Bernadette Hall Comments

Mark Money 17 October 2013

Hi, Bernadette...we don't know each other, but I wonder if you would do me a favor. Would you mind looking at some of my poems and offering some critique? I read poems like yours and like what I see, very much. But it seems that when I try to write, they just don't flow as well as yours seem to. If you have a few minutes to spare and wouldn't mind offering some hints or tips on my work, I would appreciate it. Thanks much, Mark Money

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