My name is brittany perez im a senior in high school and i love to be artistic. i enjoy what i do and hope some day i can do more with my writing.there are three people in my family my mom and little brother. at this moment i live with my grandma. life hasnt been fair with me so now my poems show what i feel. i love to sing and write little stories.please comment my poems and tell me what you think of them and what i need to do to improve. thank you bye.
I believed you were the one and true person.
Than you placed two dagger in my heart, I learned my leason.
You were once my sister and partner in crime.
I see you used me to get to my prime.
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You were brought into a world and purified our hearts.
We felt blessed to have you in the source of revenue.
till that one night god tore our lives into parts.
You never had a chance to start a life new.
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Do thee feel remorse for our tragic dispute?
With all my body I pray thee is remorseful in solitude.
Suffer for all the pain and hurt thou has inflected!
Thee shall not be content for it is restricted!
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Feeling darkness closing in with out you beside me…
You tore me down and pulled my wings so I won’t flee.
Standing there watching me cry in misery.
How can you do this to me I want to be free.
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